A couple of teens go on a road trip.

He is not slowing down so I pulled out the gun and aim it at the driver window tell my self.Wait for it don’t get nerves. He gets closer and closer I pull the trigger bang,bang,bang,bang. the car stops. I walk slowly over to the car gun drawn still. I slowly open the door a body falls out on the ground I kick him over to see his face thank god its not chad.

   I tell my self that looked like the guy that  stopped first. So something is telling me to look in the trunk so I pop the trunk.Oh my god its chad all chopped up so I slam the trunk get in the car put it in drive and try to find that gas station they told me  about so I am driving worried about the other boys.  see  some-then that looks like a gas station.. So I turn the lights of slow down and creep in there I see that guys truck so I am scared what I am going to see. SO I put the car in park and slowly walk up to the door a open it I see frank and Brian they are bleeding.I ask them what happened

to y’all they told me the crazy guy tyred to kill them.I ask were he was they had  killed him. The clerk told us to leave as fast as we can. Before we left they asked me what happened to chad? I said he is dead. The clerk told us to leave why we can and threw me the keys. We got in the truck and started to drive away its quit we are scared all of a sudden we see the cops passing us we look at each I am keep going…. 

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  • Lee Ness on Oct 30, 2009

    Very interesting story. Spooky and sad since you lost your friend Chad in this one. Very nice read.
    You talent. I wish I could write short stories.
    Thanks Lee Ness

  • cardy on Oct 30, 2009

    A good good story enjoyed the read nice work

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 30, 2009

    Very interesting story.

  • chitragopi on Oct 30, 2009

    Frightening indeed. Good story

  • alc on Oct 30, 2009

    Another great short story! Too bad Chad can’t read this!

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 30, 2009

    Your story was intreresting. A good one for Halloween, great stuff.

  • Valerie Curtiss on Nov 3, 2009

    Spooky story.

  • Themax on Nov 4, 2009

    very nice story,Thanks for sharing :)

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