In a household somewhere amongst the mountains…

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The clouds were drifting across the skies. Some were skirting the mountains, giving an air of mystery. All was still. There in one of the valleys, a crowd of people surrounded one of the houses. Inside, in one of the bedchambers, Elizabeth and Anne were sitting at a bed. Bill was there too, along with young Nick. And one or two others. They were all attending to Paul, who was laying face upwards in bed.

Elizabeth: “Don’t fight it Paul. I prevailed, and so shall you.”

Paul: “I feel so tired.”

Bill: “Don’t fight it Paul. You will soon see us again.”

Paul: “Love you all. Must I go?”

Elizabeth: “Everyone must. But look at me!”

Paul: “So tired.”

And Paul drifted away, like the clouds above.

Presently everyone stepped outside and a priest made some reassuring words. After a while people went back to their pursuits. Bill ushered Nick away.

Nick: “What is Earth?”

Bill: “That’s difficult, Nick. They say it’s a place like here: with mountains, valleys, streams, sky, just as real.”

Nick: “Must everyone go there, in the long sleep?”

Bill: “’Fraid so, Nick. They say it’s an essential part of our maturing, our education. It’s for spiritual growth.”

Nick: “When will Paul awaken?”

Bill: “I’ve no idea. They reckon he has been reborn now, in a whole new baby body. Mind you some don’t get that far. But let’s not talk about that. It can be anything from one to a hundred or so years. Elizabeth woke up only last year. She only slept for just over sixty years.”

Nick: “But what if Phil and I enter the long sleep before Paul awakens?”

Bill: “Then you will both share with him his experiences on Earth.”

Nick: “But will he not awaken before us two?”

Bill: “All being well, yes. That would be most fitting.”

Nick: “I’m sure Joan is older than us though.”

Bill: “Yes, she is approaching the time. The long sleep will soon be upon her. And a few others like Martin, Jeanette… Everyone must go through it, just the once.”

“Nick: “I hear some go through it many times!”

Bill: “Yes I’ve heard that too. But it’s just a rumour. As far as I’m concerned you ‘die’ twice: once in the long sleep, and finally when you reawaken.”

Nick: “Why don’t the sleepers starve though?”

Bill: “They are in complete suspended animation lad. But that’s enough talk of sleep. It’s time to get those chickens fed!”

So off they went…

Out of the blue a young man about the same age as Nick approached them.

Young man: “Hello I’m Michael. I just heard about Paul going to sleep. Is there anything I can do to help?”

Bill: “Thankyou Michael. I think we have everything covered.”

Michael: “Have you made any arrangements to watch Paul’s progress in his life on Earth?”

Bill: “Yes thanks. Though Nick is too young for that sort of thing.”

Michael: “Too young? Well I know he’s only about a year younger than me. I’ve been to many Viewings. Anyroad, are you Bill?”

Bill: “Yes, why?”

Michael: “Well, they say Paul’s father on Earth is your grandson Pete, and his mother is Louisa…”

Bill: “Thanks lad, but I’d rather see for myself.”

Michael: “Well, give it another twenty years or so and Nick and I will enter the long sleep ourselves. I’ve got loads of projects in mind. But hey, I’m delaying you. Better go and have a look at Paul there.”

Nick: “In his sleep?”

Michael: “Oh yes. But don’t forget, it is only for so long.”

With that Michael shot away, up the hill.

Paul Butters

Dedicated to MPA who recently re-awakened after thirty years.

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  • papaleng on Aug 8, 2011

    Such a great tribute to a a great man. we will miss you mpa.

  • No Share on Aug 8, 2011

    what a wonderful tribute, nobody stays dead, somewhere MPA will be reawaken

  • Likha on Aug 8, 2011

    Got me teary-eyed. This is truly a consolation to those of us who miss him dearly. Thanks Paul.

  • el zorro on Aug 9, 2011

    a fitting tribute a Generous and kind man whom never get to know the real person behind the name MPA :)
    thanks PaulB :)

  • Brewed Coffee on Aug 9, 2011

    “Must everyone go?” I guess this is one of those things in life that takes a lot of strength and will to accept. Sometimes, we only know the real value of someone when the person is gone. But it’s a great consolation that somewhere, we all re-awaken to a new life…

  • PaulB on Aug 9, 2011

    Thanks everyone. Actually I have just added a further section which I hope strengthens the piece. I trust it is appropriate too. I have used the names of some of my relatives in this story – unusually – and they will recognise themselves if they should view. Of course, one of the characters is not a relative and I don\’t even know his real name. All I know is his actual **character**…

  • Likha on Aug 9, 2011

    Revisiting. You offer us an enlightening perspective on death and dying. Yes, not one of us ever really knew who mpa was. We are only hinging on the good character he has shown. From the author, Mitch Albom, I learned that learning to die is learning to live. MPA deserves to be in a better place now. The One will not fail him. Thank you Paul for being with us in this difficult moment.

  • LewSethics on Aug 10, 2011

    An interesting story, but I guess I’m the odd man out, who is MPA?

  • No Share on Aug 11, 2011

    Revisiting. I don’t know why, but I prefer your first composition. However, this is nicely done. A great perspective of death and rebirth

  • PaulB on Aug 11, 2011

    @ Lews – Have just bumped the last forum thread that MPA initiated. He joined on the 11th December 2010. His full name was **Most Popular Article**. In his short time with us he made a big impact, notably in setting up blogs to help other writers. Even that last thread I just bumped offered helpful advice. He was always keen to help.

    Sadly we recently learnt that he had passed on. He had a wife and baby. MPA was 30. Apparently when he discovered he had a brain cancer he kept it secret but left his job etc. He went to help out in an hospice, until finally he was overcome himself. May he RIP. The only positive thing for me was that he was loved by the Filipino community (whom he helped greatly) members of whom I have now befriended.

  • toomanysounds on Aug 12, 2011

    Really rather heartfelt and really rather wonderful. Elegant, profound piece.

  • PaulB on Aug 13, 2011

    Sad to report that Mnofdichotomy has now announced that he too has terminal cancer. He worked with MPA on the great **Banksy** project. My story above is for him too.

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