This short piece is dedicated to Shirley Shuler, who is a big Mina and Hwang fan, second only to me. Hope you like it.

Mina slowly walks toward the Seung dojang, her father’s school, getting ready for another day of training with Hwang, her father’s best student. She expelled a long sigh. Sparring with Hwang could get so tedious, considering the fact that he was just too damn good.

She stops just outside the doorway of the dojang, and silently watches as Hwang performed a hyeong, perfectly executing the patterns, his sword Blue Thunder slashing the air. He moved not only with grace, but with such power that Mina would shake from pure force that he would expend, his presence filling the space around him.

She sighs again. He was magnificent, looking so glorious as he slayed his imaginary foe, clad only in his trousers, his chest glistening with sweat, completely focused. Mina sometimes wished Hwang would notice her more, and not just as his master’s daughter. If only there was some way… And then a mischievous glint flickered in her dark brown eyes, a sinful smile kissing her lips.

“Are you ready for me, Hwang?” Mina sweetly called.

“I’m always ready for y–”

Hwang froze. Standing before him was his master’s daughter, holding her polearm Scarlet Thunder, and wearing nothing else.

That day a different kind of sparring session took place.

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  • Lostash on Oct 6, 2009

    That Mina is a minx!!!

  • ken bultman on Oct 6, 2009

    Whew!

  • Papa Sparks on Oct 6, 2009

    Very descriptive language here. You are really good at writing these kinds of stories; I get the impression from your style and attention to detail that you like this kind of writing a lot. Are you working on some longer pieces like these? Keep up the good writing.

  • LiLSw33tD on Oct 6, 2009

    You really made the story realistic in my mind. Great job!!!!

    Lil Sweet D

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 6, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, thank you so much for the dedication, it’s good to have Mina and Hwang back, and oh, that sparring session between Mina and Hwang…

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 7, 2009

    A lovely and imaginative piece.

    Christine

  • johnnydod on Oct 7, 2009

    I was lost for a moment in time with your wonderful work

  • papaleng on Oct 7, 2009

    I love you Mina is all I can say. very lovely story.

  • Teves on Oct 8, 2009

    Nice…

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