Hwang and Mina, lovers at play.

Soft butterfly kisses
Fluttering upon my skin
His dark brown lashes
Invoking such sin
Awakening in me
The little girl within

I laugh and giggle
As he sweetly grins
Crying out as he tickles
Completely giving in
Holding me so close
As I kiss him on the chin
So lost within our play
Surrendering to our whims

               * * *
Oh!
Touch me…over here
Let your fingers slip…down there
Delving in…so deep
A caress…so exquisitely sweet
Stroking…floating
Bliss!

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Comments (11)
  • ken bultman on Apr 22, 2010

    Exquisite. Words that become gentle movement that take the reader along on a trip towards ecstacy.

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 22, 2010

    A beautifully written piece.

  • Sourav on Apr 22, 2010

    Nice poem! Well written!

  • Atanacio on Apr 22, 2010

    wow very good write hmmm?

  • LoveDoctor on Apr 22, 2010

    I love this poem. It is so beautiful and the imagery is awesome! A very creative piece. keep up the good work.

  • giftarist on Apr 22, 2010

    Great, great! I very much like it, milady!

  • VTech on Apr 23, 2010

    Good Post

  • Shirley Shuler on Apr 23, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, beautifully written, it’s always a pleasure reading about my two favorite people, Mina and Hwang!

  • sara20 on Apr 24, 2010

    Interesting post with lost of information and today i know about it more info. Thanks

    Sara

  • Domenico Cigliano on Jun 3, 2010

    playful and sweet, I felt like I was floating on a wave.. so enjoyed this poem… lovely, plain and simple

  • T. S. GARP on Jul 11, 2010

    Ecstasy expressed. Well done!

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