This story is about a young girl who moved to NJ. She experience some evil or bad things in her family she really didn’t know about. Her mom tells her to unpack. She unpacks and put her stuff upstairs. But then her mom tells her to fix the phone. When her mom taped her on the back she saw a very beautiful bag. The phone was in there to. But when she unzipped the bag and the found a book.

Hi my name is Boku Ushite. i am 16, i live in New Jersey, and this is the story about me… and my own world. When i first moved out here i thought it was quite and peaceful, but i was right, it was quite and peaceful. The trees looked like it was in peace with each other, the birds was singing with such joy. i thought to myself it will be a nice life in New Jersey, but i was wrong. When we first put our stuff in the house, i started to look around.The downstairs was big and when i walked upstairs it was about the same. It was beautiful. i looked around some more , until my mom called me to unpack. i went down stairs to get my stuff and take it upstairs to my room. i started to unpack my stuff and put it away. My mom called me. so i went down stairs. She said ” i want u to fix up the phone for me so i can call your grandmother from Japan.” I looked in one of the bags , it wasn’t in there. I looked in all of the bags. I kept on looking. My mom said something I wasn’t listening, i was to busy looking for the phone. Then she taped me on the back . Then i turned around. She pointed at this red and bluish color bag. It was a beautiful bag. i got it. I open the bag, i looked in the bag. The phone was in there but something else was in there. i took out the phone and put it aside of me and put my hand back in there. I unzipped the zipper that was in side of the bag. It was this book. I reached for the book , until my mom tooked the bag and said “did u fine it.” i looked at her “yes i did” i said softy. “its right here.” i picked up the phone and show it to her. she looked at me and smiled. “Now go put the phone in, Ok.” then i said “Ok” i turned around and started to put the phone together. It was kinda hard. Then i finally got it. I told my mom that the phone was working. Then she came over to me and check the phone, to see if the phone is working. She said “thank u. can u please take my those to bags up to my room.” I said”yes, mother.” I took one bag at a time, but i mad sure that i took the red and bluish bag first. I took the bags up stairs. i look at the red and bluish bag. i reached for it before my mom got off the phone. I hurry up to open the bag. i put my hand in the bag and re-opened the zipper. I hurry up and took the book, i closed the bag, ran out my mothers room, put the book in my room and ran downstairs.

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