Within seconds of landing to reinforce an American base, a new recruit is wounded before he gets time to fire a shot in anger. New Meat was a term used to describe new recruits by their more experienced comrades.

PART 2

Tony lay propped between a dirt covered roll of tarpaulin and a leaking oil drum.  He tried to move.  Pain sliced its way through his body, his head jerked in reaction and he cried out.  Medics, where were the medics?  They would not leave him, they would reach him soon and in the meantime, he had no choice but to stay easy.   

What if the base was overrun?  Serge Monk’s vivid tales of the Vietcong’s mutilation of the dead and wounded were a terrifying possibility now.  He made an effort to focus and stop his rising panic.  His M 16 was of no use to him, he could not move his arms.  He looked down his body to see where he had been hit.  Bloodied and dirty, his fatigues lay in rags on him.  Blood was pooling on the oil smeared earth from a gaping hole above his left hip bone.  A thumb and forefinger were missing from his left hand, there was surprisingly little blood.  He tried again to move but his body would not respond.

Out by the perimeter a Huey was nose down.  The pilot, still in harness, slumped over the controls.  There were more pieces missing from the chopper than remained on it.  He could not see the co-pilot or the door gunner, he hoped they had both made it out safe.  Tony slowly turned his head to the right and the bunker he had been trying to get to, came into view.  Flames flicked erratically into the air, unhindered by the corrugated roofing and sandbagged walls which had been obliterated.  Sid’s upturned helmet lay beside a blackened and smouldering lump of timber.  A dust covered boot was attached to the timber, it was someone’s limb.  If anyone was left alive on the base, they were staying concealed.  A cloud of black smoke drifted across, obscuring his view and braking his concentration. 

Tony let his head slump back, he was beginning to feel very nauseous.  Drained and exhausted, he could feel the little remaining energy he had seeping from his battered body.  He felt his eyelids dropping.  A voice inside his head urged him to drift off, to slide away from the pain.

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  • alensmith on Jan 21, 2010

    great writen..and thanks for ur reply also that i will find in my post

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 21, 2010

    Such horrific sacrafice they went through. You captured the brutality and innocence. Well done.

  • yes me on Jan 21, 2010

    Loved that. It was griping, had great imagery…. suspense.and a sweet finish…. my own favourite one…. would be Ice lollies, in place of the needle.

    Great piece….

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 21, 2010

    We send them our to suffer and die. How we live with ourselves is a the greatest puzzle of all.

  • Patrick Regoniel on Jan 21, 2010

    Such a vivid story describing the horrors of war.

  • ken bultman on Jan 22, 2010

    How well you described one story out of thousands the horrors of batle. It was very easy to visualize with the mind’s eye.

  • St Angels on Jan 22, 2010

    :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 22, 2010

    A very well told story of the horrors which must be happening even in today’s wars. A great piece.

    Christine

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 22, 2010

    A very well told story of the horrors which are still happening even in today\’s wars. Well done.

    Christine

  • alensmith on Jan 22, 2010

    nice post..thanks for ur reply also in my post.

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  • drelayaraja on Jan 22, 2010

    Great story. Took us to the place

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 22, 2010

    Great Piece…really nice…

  • AlmaG on Jan 22, 2010

    I’ve read part one and now part two. Great story of heroism!

  • alensmith on Jan 23, 2010

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  • mkd1788 on Jan 24, 2010

    you made great job friend..really great..

  • standingproud on Jan 24, 2010

    Now this brought such a tear to my eye.

    Brilliant.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 24, 2010

    Another well done,

  • Alicia Wind on Jan 25, 2010

    Vivid…and interesting…

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  • albert1jemi on Jan 28, 2010

    great share tnx

  • martie on Jan 29, 2010

    It really wants to make you weep at the needlessness or war.

  • Anj M on Feb 3, 2010

    WOW..DAT WAS A WONDERFUL STORY..

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