This story is dedicated to the men and women who never made it back home from Vietnam. New recruits, especially draftees, were termed New Meat. Late on in the war, most veterans of the conflict had already lost too many friends and did not want to become closely attached to these new recruits. Veterans cared for them, taught them, tried to keep them alive but to avoid further heartache, they would not allow them become friends.

PART 1 of 2.

They were taking fire.  The chopper pilot fought for control a few feet above the ‘LZ’ or landing zone.  Five recruits ‘new meats’ leapt for their lives and taking a lead from their experienced comrades raced, doubled over, towards makeshift bunkers.

Tony Fererase had lived in both excited anticipation and dread of this moment, when he would first see action.  He had been in Vietnam two months.

He hit the dusty ground as the first mortar landed, sending chunks of burning metal and ruptured earth scything through the torrid air.  To his left Sid, his friend since boot camp and a ‘new meat’ like himself, cried out in pain.  The need to help his friend overrode his fear, he ran to him.  Blood poured from an ugly would below his jawbone.  Tony screamed out for a medic.  His cries for help could not be heard above the whirling rotor blades of the choppers sweeping in and racing away again.  The down blast from the chopper blades threw tornados of dust at them and almost lifted Tony off his feet, as he knelt beside his wounded friend.  He grabbed Sid’s arm, hauled it across his shoulder and yanked him unceremoniously to his feet. 

Weighted down by his semi conscious friend, Tony staggered towards the nearest bunker he could make out.  Weighted down by his friend, it seemed to Tony that ever step he took towards safety, left them not nearer but further from the bunker.  The zing of incoming bullets and blast of mortar shells were answered by a massive, deafening and intensity of return fire from the American defenders.  The horrendous noise made it impossible for Tony to hear the last rasping breath leave Sid’s body. 

The bunker immediately to the right of the one he was headed for took a direct hit.  It erupted; flames, sandbags, fragmented metal and bodies shot skywards.  He felt the scorching heat blast and in the same instant was lifted off his feet and hurled through the air.

When he began to slowly regain consciousness, Tony became aware of having had the worst nightmare of his short life.  He remembered trying to run from some great unseen danger, but no matter how fast he ran, he remained rooted to a blood soaked spot.  He felt rivulets of sweat roll down his brow at the memory.  An unseen, formless assailant had been trying to stab at him.  The acrid smell of burning filled his nostrils, its effect, like smelling salts, forced him awake.

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  • amandeep13 on Jan 21, 2010

    Good Stuff

    Keep the good work on

  • ken bultman on Jan 21, 2010

    Forceful imagery. Well done. Awaiting part two.

  • ken bultman on Jan 21, 2010

    Riveting imagery. Well done. Awaiting part two.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 21, 2010

    A poignant and vivid story. So well written.

    Christine

  • mkd1788 on Jan 21, 2010

    great work..great story..

  • athena goodlight on Jan 21, 2010

    Powerful words… moving story. Well worth the read. Thanks

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 21, 2010

    An intense and dramatic write.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 22, 2010

    Nice piece….

  • standingproud on Jan 24, 2010

    Sad as it is, but very well written.

    I just dont know how they do what they have done.

    Both excited anticipation and dread of this moment, a massive adrenalin rush I bet

  • AlmaG on Jan 25, 2010

    The saddest part of becoming a soldier is to never come back home.

  • Anj M on Feb 3, 2010

    Wonderful start…

  • yes me on Feb 12, 2010

    Don’t know how I missed this, now I ‘ll have to go read part two again…. cheers Willie

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