Emma is a mountain girl. She is nearly fifteen and contemplating her marriage to Andy who is almost eighteen. They are on their way to a dance where Emma meets an exciting stranger.

Emmalooked at her tobacco stained hands as she carried her last shock of tobacco to the smoke house. The sun was setting and papa had gone ahead to pitch down hay for the mules and slop the hogs. She would have to hurry to have time to run to the creek and bathe before supper. Andy would be along to walk her to the party and Emma didn’t want to be late to her best friend’s party. She tied up her shock of tobacco and hung it upside down in the smoke house. When the crop was gathered and hung, papa would build the slow burning fire to smoke the tobacco and make it sweet.

Emma hurried to the cabin to get her clean clothes that were hanging on a nail above her bed, then picked up a clean rag and a bar of the lye soap that lay on the sill above the door. Mama had the fire burning in the wood cook stove and Emma could smell the good mess of greens and streaked meat cooking on the stove. She could smell the corn bread in the oven. Her stomach gave a little rumble as she went out the kitchen door and down the trail to the creek.

Stepping out of her sweaty tobacco stained clothes Emma slid into the cool pool of water. Papa had scooped out the bottom of the creek to provide a good bathing place as deep as her waist. Cool water slipped over her shoulders as she ducked under to soap her hair. There was no time to linger so Emma quickly finished her bath and stepped out of the water. She wrung out her cloth and dried herself as best she could and slipped into her clean clothes.

Supper was finished when she heard banging on the front door. Emmacalled good-bye to mama and papa as she ran out to meet Andy. Dusk was falling and squirrels chattered. Whipper-wills called deep in the woods. The mountain air had cooled and stars were twinkling in the evening sky. Emma had know Andy all her life and she took it for granted that they would be married. She was nearly fifteen and Andy was turning eighteen.

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  • ken bultman on Dec 12, 2009

    Wonderful story. Life except for circumstances. Damn.

  • Svetlana Cherevik on Dec 12, 2009

    nicely written story

  • johnnydod on Dec 12, 2009

    I was riveted wonderful story

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 12, 2009

    What an adventurous young lady. Great story!

  • BluSphere on Dec 12, 2009

    Nice story :)
    Make the pictures bigger next time, that means much to me :)
    Thank you for sharing this.

    Best regards,

    Anders W Hegelund

  • K.Reshma on Dec 12, 2009

    A very nice story

  • Jon Abraham on Dec 12, 2009

    It is a beautiful story with a country setting.

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 12, 2009

    Youthful love is so unpredictable. I loved reading it.

  • Debra. on Dec 12, 2009

    That was a very intriguing sweet story, Ruby. I definitely enjoyed reading it. Will there be a follow-up to come?

  • Sharif Ishnin on Dec 12, 2009

    I wonder what holds for Tulens in a distant place? Riveting story.;)

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 12, 2009

    What a beautiful story Ruby. I enjoy the ending. It is so romantic!

  • abhishek40914 on Dec 12, 2009

    good story ruby

  • J J Neuman on Dec 12, 2009

    The title alone pulled me in…a little mysterious. The story and setting are unique…I think this needs to be continued…JJ…standing by…

  • PR Mace on Dec 12, 2009

    What a beautifully told tale. Stories like this are my first love in writing. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 13, 2009

    Great story, Ruby, I enjoyed reading it very much!!

  • Aiyanna on Dec 13, 2009

    Beautiful writing!!! I think you should have a sequel to it… :)

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Dec 13, 2009

    a very nice story

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 13, 2009

    A very well told story.

  • Samuel Collins on Dec 13, 2009

    I like the prose. So sweet I hat to print it out for my sister to read.

  • Paul Roberts on Dec 13, 2009

    I enjoyed the journey. Presented well. Friend, fan, smile

  • CA Johnson on Dec 13, 2009

    This is a great story. I enjoyed reading it.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 13, 2009

    Wonderful story!

  • AvantPointGuard on Dec 14, 2009

    A slice of life. Very good

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