About an angel visiting Lucifer in Hell.

Lucifer was tiring of Hell. An eternity of other people’s pain was wearing on him. This wasn’t what he had wanted when he first led his rebel army against the Heavens. But at least he could wangle some holidays. Not like the Other.

Now he was returning from a decade on Earth. He liked these little vacations. He liked to walk without wings, to feel air, fresh air on his skin and to breathe in smells other than sulphurous fumes. On Earth he could do whatever he liked. Not like here. Here he was on duty. Here he was The Devil. He was an angel by birth, after all, even if he had taken the Fall and angels have no free will. He was in the employ of his enemy. And he hated it. His wings unfolded, great black feathery wings singed by fire and tattered by time, and let his guise of humanity slip. Demons wouldn’t care if he walked about in a leopard-print catsuit, so what did it matter if he walked naked? As an angel he was sexless in any case. Asexual. Sometimes on Earth he liked to wear gender and he liked to be referred to as “he”, unless he took female form, of course. Anything was better than “it”.

The door to his chamber crashed open and a pair of demons slunk in. Female and male demons; a daughter of Lillith and a lowborn creature with horns. Lucifer slumped into his obsidian throne with a sigh. With weary anger he barked a question at them, wondering why they had disturbed him, watching them with his head resting in a manicured hand.

“Emissary from the Silver City,” rasped the female, running scarred fingers through green hair.

“An ambassador has arrived from…the other place, most unholy liege,” spat the male with a sycophantic bow. Lucifer hated the way they grovelled to him.

The devil in the black throne raised a golden eyebrow. Was it that time already? Every few millennia the Other sent an emissary to him. An angel from the world above sent to inform him of the Other’s wishes, to request an apocalypse, to praise, or, more frequently, to criticise. An angel. A messenger. That’s what the word meant of course. Another reminder of Lucifer’s loyalty to his foe. Still, angels make better conversation than demons do, and it’s always nice to see an unfamiliar face.

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  • Antioch on May 5, 2007

    Hey, I really enjoyed reading this, I was just wondering around the internet when your text appeared in a search engine. I have to say Im surprised no one else has said anything, although Im not sure how the community works on this site – seen as I have only just come across it.
    Anyway great story, touching and nice alternative view on Lucifers damnation, I’ll read more of your work if I have time.
    If you don’t see this it doesn’t matter, I hope you keep writing anyway.

    Antioch

  • Lucy Lockett on May 10, 2007

    You have a niche market for your writing!

  • Meri Jeffrey on May 24, 2007

    I’m enjoying this one too! Will get back!

  • BlackMetal on May 25, 2007

    very creative, i enjoyed it a lot! 5/5 stars!

  • Morgan Drake Eckstein on May 25, 2007

    Very nice perspective on Lucifer. It does make one wonder if the Lord is evil for ordaining the necessity of the devil. And I love that last line.

  • Emma C S on May 26, 2007

    Thanks everybody! I’m glad you all like it. There are a few lines in here that I still don’t like, I might have to re-edit it. I’m not a christian myself, but I’ve always found the concept of the devil and hell and the rebel angels fascinating. I’ve got to say though, this was HIGHLY influenced by “Paradise Lost” and the “His Dark Materials” Trilogy. And probably the Sandman comics a bit as well. I think a part of me wrote it for the sole purpose of using that last line though!

  • adam on Nov 9, 2007

    good stuff, as usual
    -adam

  • Cassondra on Dec 22, 2007

    I really enjoyed reading this.
    Any books by you out on the market I am definitely buying.

  • Joni Keith on Feb 15, 2009

    Emma, I had never thought of the Devil in such a way, much less as having had a lover, and then loosing that lover. I’m new to this genre but I must say I’m taken with your tales.

  • miss cornelia on Feb 25, 2009

    An interesting twist on an old story of heaven and hell. It was almost like you made the Almighty the bad guy, but then again it was from Lucifer’s perspective so I guess to him that’s the way it would be right? Very entertaining.

  • Casey Kelley on Feb 25, 2009

    I absolutely loved this Emma. I wish it had more. I would read it forever!

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