Do you live in an old house? Ever heard noises in the middle of the night?

  The house seems so quiet.  The kids are in bed, the dogs curled up sleeping, and you are relaxing with a good book or maybe your favorite show or movie.  You know those nights, I know I’ve enjoyed a few.  Then when you are really relaxed and involved in what you are doing, you hear what sounds like someone walking around upstairs.  You look up and wonder, Are those kids out of bed?  So you get up and walk upstairs, the kids are in bed and no one else is up there.  So who was walking around?  Strange.  You go back downstairs thinking, old house just creaking again.  Sit back down, get comfortable again, and there goes the floor again, creaking as though someone is walking around, you sit there listening, then a door closes.  By now the dogs are looking around and beginning to growl.  This doesn’t help, it only makes you more nervous.

  Grab one of the dogs, the bigger of them, and take them with you upstairs.  Still nothing there but your dog is trying to get away and go back downstairs.  About now you have decided you are not going to be able to relax anymore so you might as well just go to bed.  At least the dogs will be up there with you. Take a phone and a flashlight up, just in case, you know, even though you are telling yourself that it was just the house creaking again.  Check on the kids, they are sleeping peacefully, then go climb in bed.   You lay there awhile, listening.  Just before you drift off to sleep you hear the sounds of someone walking down the stairs.  “What is going on?” you ask yourself, ” It’s just the house, I’m not going to check.”  Fairly confident with your decision you try to relax again.  Then you hear the kitchen cupboards closing.  Take your flashlight and your chicken of a dog, because you at least feel somewhat safer with them than without, and head downstairs.   A cupboard door closes just before you reach the kitchen, the dog pulls away from your hand and runs whining back upstairs, leaving you standing there frozen.  Be brave, go to the kitchen and turn on the light.  You are ready to scream and run, or maybe attack, when the light flashes on and there is nothing there.

   After checking the entire house for open doors and windows and reassuring yourself that there is no one else in the house you go back to bed.  Okay, so what if you leave all the lights on?  At least you feel safer.  Tomorrow you will have to do something about those chicken dogs though.  Maybe you should get a cat!  

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  • Westbrook on Jan 12, 2009

    Christy, you are funny. Better get a big cat. However, I have noticed some house cats are scared of mice. I think you are letting your mind run wild, then again who knows?

  • Jenny Heart on Jan 12, 2009

    Love this spooky little tale. It’s sunny, and not toooooooo scarey. Great writing!

  • Holly J. Harrington on Jan 12, 2009

    Well if it is a ghost and he/she is harmless just tell them to close the cupboard doors when they are through and stop making so much noise. They might wake the kids.
    Then again could be the mice critters. They love old houses and they manage to get in sometimes. So a big cat is lovely.
    Loved it. Chuckle Chuckle. Dont be frightened you probably have lovely company.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 12, 2009

    Thanks for being a good story-teller.

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 12, 2009

    I love that, chicken dog :0 Great read, thanks!

  • James DeVere on Jan 12, 2009

    There has been a lot of scary pieces lately in here! Evocative of every scary film since time began. Alfred Hitchcock I hear you ask?

    I thought this could be used as a metaphor for the state of the world at present. You are just going along and you hear the thump of banks crashing, the creep of job losses the bang of recession news – Get a cat ! Thanks . j

  • nutuba on Jan 12, 2009

    Effective and nicely done!

  • Deelstra on Jan 14, 2009

    Christy, We named ours George….

  • eddiego65 on Jan 17, 2009

    Very engaging story! Loved it!

  • ML Sheldon on Jan 20, 2009

    I had to keep reading right to the end, lol. I loved it, and I can relate so well to what you said about justifying the noises… Awesome writing.

  • Katien on Feb 11, 2009

    That was good – And I have heard strange noises at night, I usually out it down to the plumbing!

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