While trying to take care of his biker friends, a wealthy private investigator finds himself the target of a cyber-thief. With the aide of friends in law enforcement and new acquaintences from federal agencies “Pink” gets his man but loses his ride.

Pink lost sight of the pick-up as he suddenly had another very serious problem. He was screaming down the exit ramp at a hundred miles per hour with three cars ahead of him, one in each available lane, idling at a red light. There was no way he was going to be able to bring the bike to a stop and to make matters worse there was a tractor trailer truck just edging it’s way into the intersection. For just one second the image of his bike on the day he bought it flashed through Pink’s mind, but he knew what he had to do. Quickly holstering his weapon, he once again grabbed the handlebar with two hands, tapped the rear brakes only a few times to try to slow down a little without locking them up and, after narrowly missing the two cars on either side of him entered the intersection at about sixty. He cranked the handlebars hard to the right, in his mind apologized to the beautiful machine and laid the bike down on its side. His momentum carried him through the intersection, underneath the tractor-trailer and about eighty feet up the Parkway entrance ramp on the other side, before he finally came to a stop. He was torn up pretty bad, but he was alive.

Suddenly, from the other side of the intersection Pink heard horns blaring. He looked up and saw the black pick-up crashing through the cars still waiting for the light to change, then barely missing two cars in the middle of the intersection, one in the northbound lane, one in the southbound lane, and bearing down on him, where he lay in a heap in the middle of the entrance ramp. He knew he couldn’t stand, and just as surely he knew he couldn’t miss. Drawing his pistol with his left hand, he took a deep breath, steadied his aim and fired all four remaining rounds in the cylinder in a tight grouping through the driver’s side of the windshield, and promptly passed out.

When Pink woke up he was lying in a hospital bed and from the feel of the burning pain in his leg and up his right side, his morphine drip was due to be changed. Ritchie was dozing in the chair alongside his bed.

“Hey dude,” Pink mumbled, “how’d that movie end? I fell asleep, I think.”

“It ended with one in the morgue and one in the ER,” answered Ritchie. “Now, I can say it ended good for our side. It was tight for a little while there.”

“It’s a shame,” said Pink, trying to sit up a little and quickly thinking better of it and lying back, “he was just a kid.”

“A lot of bad guys are just kids,” replied Ritchie, no pity in his voice, “it doesn’t make them any better just because their still kids.”  Pink turned toward the open door as he heard high heels walking in from the hallway. Martina strode up to his bedside flashing a warm, thankful smile.

“Finally awake huh, lazy bones?” she asked with a laugh.

“Yeah,” Pink said returning her smile, “but I’m thinking seriously about another nap.”

“Well,” she told him, “I can’t blame you there.”

“Before I nod off though, we need to talk business.”

“Oh…” she said.

“Yeah,” he continued, “I need to offer you a job. I need somebody to keep my parcel fluid you know.” She laughed and he just kept on. “I need some one to, you know, scrape the plaque in my arteries. I can pay you a lot more than the government can and, hey, who knows, you might have a little fun.”

“I’ll have to think about it Mr. Ellingwood,” she answered

“All my friends call me ‘Pink”,” he said.

“I’ll let you know Pink,” she said. She bent toward him and after leaving a light kiss on his forehead turned for the door.

10
Liked it
Comments (7)
  • Mikayla on Jul 26, 2009

    This is a hard read to put down David..I like the odd detective fiction with various elements thrown in ..even if it’s pure fiction. I look forward to reading the whole story again and giving you a thorough review.

  • RS Wing on Jul 26, 2009

    Hilarious Piece David. You have Johnny Law, Richie Dawson, Navy seal, Good ‘ole Pink. Some real colorful characters wielding .357’s , Reads a bit like a chapter out of Hunter S. Thompsons “Hell’s Angels” meets Rockford files. Real high energy and cool settling twisty end there….calms the whole experience. That’s what this writing is, a really cool experience. Really enjoyed the biker underbelly theme mixed with the private investigator and his “Lawful” contacts Richie. Really cool read man. A++

  • RS Wing on Jul 26, 2009

    And how could I forget about Tiny’s Tattoo’s…all cool biker characters man. A+++

  • oldster on Jul 26, 2009

    Great story, thoroughly enjoyed it, even though I’m not into biking, look forward to the romance.

  • clafleur on Jul 30, 2009

    great story, i find the bikers interesting. when i was a kid, if you rode a harley it meant you were a bad butt, however now a days everyone is ridding and it is hard to tell. keep up the good work.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Aug 23, 2009

    Great stuff, David. Pink is like a modern-day biker version of Hemingway in parts. Such a gripping, engrossing and pulsating story. I liked the tech angle, with geeks as bad guys. Terrific twist. I’d love to see a sequel to this, with more of Marty.

  • XXElleXX on Oct 14, 2009

    This was a pleasure to read again David Crerand :-) A clever and lively story..the plot is neat and ingenious..the characters rounded and credible. Being a biker is a participatory lifestyle..there are no stars or role-models to worship and emulate, like the teenage music..every biker is the star of his own show..but instead of fame he takes infamy..all he needs is a bike and the appropriate attitude. Awesome David :-)

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading