While trying to take care of his biker friends, a wealthy private investigator finds himself the target of a cyber-thief. With the aide of friends in law enforcement and new acquaintences from federal agencies “Pink” gets his man but loses his ride.

But Pink wasn’t hearing anything about bank policy. “Mr. Hendricks,” he interrupted, “are you familiar at all with my numerous accounts with your bank?”

“Why yes,” Hendricks stammered, “of course I’m familiar with your accounts.”

“And you do understand,” Pink continued, “that this man, carrying a great deal of money from your bank, made an attempt on my life last night?”

“Yes,” Hendricks replied, and Pink could almost hear the sweat rolling down his forehead, “I do understand. But this is a police matter and we usually, by bank policy only release that information directly to the police.”

“You don’t think,” Pink continued, schmoozing for all he was worth, “that maybe, in the interest of customer service, you might be able to relax the rules just a tad?”

“Well,” the banker answered, “I don’t know about that. I mean, I could get in trouble or worse yet, the bank could get in trouble.”

“Oh, I’m not going to tell anyone, and if you don’t tell anyone, well then, who’s going to know?” Finally, Pink went for the jugular. “How long would it take you Mr. Hendricks, to close-out all my accounts?”

“Listen, Mr. Ellingwood, that is completely unnecessary,” said the banker, resignation in his voice, “I’d be glad to answer your question.” In the background Pink could hear the sound of computer keys tapping. “Mr. Wesco did in fact have an account with us. The account was opened just yesterday morning at nine-oh-five am. There was a single deposit of twenty thousand dollars at exactly nine-ten am, and at nine-fifteen precisely there was a cash withdrawal of twenty-thousand dollars effectively closing the account.”

“I see,” said Pink, “and the deposit of twenty-thousand dollars, who made that?”

Again Pink heard the sound of the computer keys tapping. “Why,” said Mr. Hendricks, a surprised tone in his voice, “you did.”

It was two hours later and Pink was downtown at the Federal building on the seventh floor. Several irate phone calls to Mr. Hendrick’s bosses, a quick call to the Federal Bureau of Investigation headquarters in Washington, a call to the Commissioner of the Office of Consumer Affairs and Business Regulation, and finally a formal request to the National Office of the Comptroller of the Currency had secured a meeting with Marty Grosteiner, Special Counsel to the Federal Bank Regulatory Agency. Pink had never owned a suit, but he had really made an effort to dress professionally. He wore a navy blue pair of slacks, a pale blue oxford shirt with button down tab collars, a vintage Gerry Garcia tie, dark socks and penny loafers. He had been waiting in the conference room for about fifteen minutes when finally the door opened and in strode one of the handsomest women he had seen in a long, long time. She was about five seven, with long auburn hair, soft hazel eyes, and skin as smooth as porcelain. She wore a simple black business suit and an appropriately buttoned white blouse that could not hide the superior figure beneath.

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  • Mikayla on Jul 26, 2009

    This is a hard read to put down David..I like the odd detective fiction with various elements thrown in ..even if it’s pure fiction. I look forward to reading the whole story again and giving you a thorough review.

  • RS Wing on Jul 26, 2009

    Hilarious Piece David. You have Johnny Law, Richie Dawson, Navy seal, Good ‘ole Pink. Some real colorful characters wielding .357’s , Reads a bit like a chapter out of Hunter S. Thompsons “Hell’s Angels” meets Rockford files. Real high energy and cool settling twisty end there….calms the whole experience. That’s what this writing is, a really cool experience. Really enjoyed the biker underbelly theme mixed with the private investigator and his “Lawful” contacts Richie. Really cool read man. A++

  • RS Wing on Jul 26, 2009

    And how could I forget about Tiny’s Tattoo’s…all cool biker characters man. A+++

  • oldster on Jul 26, 2009

    Great story, thoroughly enjoyed it, even though I’m not into biking, look forward to the romance.

  • clafleur on Jul 30, 2009

    great story, i find the bikers interesting. when i was a kid, if you rode a harley it meant you were a bad butt, however now a days everyone is ridding and it is hard to tell. keep up the good work.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Aug 23, 2009

    Great stuff, David. Pink is like a modern-day biker version of Hemingway in parts. Such a gripping, engrossing and pulsating story. I liked the tech angle, with geeks as bad guys. Terrific twist. I’d love to see a sequel to this, with more of Marty.

  • XXElleXX on Oct 14, 2009

    This was a pleasure to read again David Crerand :-) A clever and lively story..the plot is neat and ingenious..the characters rounded and credible. Being a biker is a participatory lifestyle..there are no stars or role-models to worship and emulate, like the teenage music..every biker is the star of his own show..but instead of fame he takes infamy..all he needs is a bike and the appropriate attitude. Awesome David :-)

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