A funny,sweet love story.
There once was a guy named Hitori Higurashi and a girl named Faye Lee. They have know eachother since Hitori was eight and Faye was four. All they would ever do was fight about anything.One sunny afternoon on Faye’s way to school she runs right into Hitori, who is on his way home from college. Faye says,”Hey! you big jerk! watch where your going.”Hitori says, hey! cupcake! watch where your going!” Faye yells at him” don’t call me cupcake! He just laughs at her and says “oh,ok Faye.” He shakes his head and walks past her. She yells at him again, fine! don’t even help me pick up all of my papers that you made me drop!”He keeps walking and laughing alittle. She picks up her papers and runs to school. All of her friends yell at her and tell her she is late for school again. Faye says “I know but it wasn’t my fault , it was Hitori’s again he ran into me and made me drop all my school work.” Her friends say “oh, Hitori is so handsome and we bet he likes you, because he always calls you cupcake.” They all giggle. Faye says, “oh, no he doesn’t he just calls me that because i ate alot of cupcakes when i was like four and he started to call me cupcake.” “He is a big , mean jerk!” All of her friends laugh more. She shakes her head and goes to class. The day passes by and she walks home alone ,then she sees Hitori in his sports car with some girl. She stops and looks at them, then all of the sudden they pull up beside her. Hitori asks whats wrong cupcake, you jealous? Faye , gives him the evil look and says, no i’m not jealous you big jerk! Then she turns and walks away mad. She can hear Hitori and that girl laughing. She gets even more mad at Hitori. The next day was a nice Saturday for Faye and her friends at the city park. They were all laughing and talking, then all of a sudden Hitori and his best friend Takeshi walk up saying hi to them. Hitori smiles and says” hi cupcake.” Faye doesn’t smile and says “don’t call me that.” Hitori laughs and then he asks “do you all want to go to a party tonight?” All of the girls say sure.So, Faye and her friends leave the park and go to her house to get ready. Later that night they get to the party and Faye walks in and sees Hitori looking different than usual . She keeps looking at him until he walks over to her and says,”hi there cupcake.” She looks up at him and says, ” don’t call me that” Hitori says, “you know something , you look nice when your dressed up.” Faye starts to blush and says “uh,thanks i think.” He smiles at her and says” your welcome cupcake, i mean Faye.”Then Takeshi walks over and asks Faye to dance. Faye says, “sure.” As Faye and Takeshi dance, Hitori keeps watching them. Then Hitori walks over and asks ” may i cut in?”Takeshi says, ok and leaves. Then Faye asks ,”why do you want to dance with me?” Hitori softly says ,”well i just do ok.” As they danced Hitori held Faye close and she started to blush deeply. He looks down at her and smiles.Then he whispers , “you know cupcake you look beautiful tonight.” She looks up at him and says, your just saying that so you can get lucky.” Hitori says, “no i mean it , your beautiful.”Then she says,” why should i believe you?” “Because your always mean to me and we fight all the time.” He softly says,” i know and i am very sorry for that.”She smiles and says ,”ok i forgive you.” Hitori walks Faye outside holding her hand. He softly says “can i walk you home?” She says”yes, you can.”He smiles at her and she smiles back.He walks her home alittle later. As they get to her house,they stand on the steps and Hitori leans close to Faye. He softly whispers”can i kiss you now?”Faye blushes and softly says”umm,yes you can.”He leans closer ,Faye closes her eyes and he softly kisses her. As they kiss ,Hitori wraps his arms around her holding her close.Faye blushes as they continue to kiss. After a few minutes Hitori slowly moves back smiling looking at her.Then Faye finally opens her eyes looking up at him and smiles. He says “do you want to go on a date with me tomorrow?” She says”sure, i would like that.” “Where will you take me?” He says”well one of your favorite places , i know you go to all the time.” She smiles and says “ok.” He smiles and kisses her again, then he says” ok, i will see you tomorrow around eight.”He leaves and she waves bye ,then she goes inside her house. The next day around eight Hitori knocks on Fayes door. Fayes little brother Sasuke opens the door and says ” hi, Faye is still getting ready .”Hitori smiles and says ” ok.” Sasuke asks ” aren’t you too old for my sister?” “I know our dad will freak out.” Hitori laughs saying “I’m not that much older than Faye.” Sasuke asks” why are you going out with her?” “I thought you two hated eachother?” Hitori says “well when you think you don’t like a girl, it means you do.”After alittle while Faye comes down stairs, saying ” hi Hitori.” He smiles at her and says “hi ,Faye.”He walks up to her and takes her hand saying ” lets go.”They go outside and get into his sports car. After about an hour they get to the mall. Hitori opens the car door for her ,holding his hand out. Faye takes his hand and smiles.As they walk in the mall holding hands Hitori’s friend Takeshi walks up to them. He says” hi there” ” So, are you two dating now?”Faye blushes and looks up at Hitori. Hitori smiles and says” yes, we are.” Takeshi says, “oh ok.” “I just thought you hated eachother.” Hitori shakes his head and says “no, we don’t” Faye smiles and squeezes his hand alittle. Takeshi says ok, well good luck you two.”Then he leaves. Faye looks at Hitori and says “so you never hated me, then why did always make me mad?” Hitori says “well, i just liked to tease you.” “I know it was wrong but i like seeing you get angry, you look so cute.” She says “oh, really?”Then she hits him on his arm.He says “ow, why did you do that for?” She says “thats for making me angry all those times.” He just laughs, then he hugs her. Then he takes her hand and says ” lets go look around.” She nods and says “ok.” He takes her into a jewelry store and says “pick out anything you want.”She smiles and asks”really, anything i want?” He nods and says ” yes, anything.” So, she looked around and found a blue star neckless.She says”ok, i would like this.” Hitori says, “ok.” Then he tells the clerk to take it out and hands it to Hitori. Hitori puts it around Faye’s neck. She softly says, “thank you Hitori but what is this for?” He smiles and says “well, its for you to remember our first date.” She smiles at him and he smiles back. They hold hand as they leave the store. Faye asks”where should we go next?” Hitori smiles and says”a dress shop.” She asks”why a dress shop?” He says”because you need a ball gown for a party. She says, oh a fancy party,ok. She smile as he leads her into the dress shop. As they go in the clerk walks over and asks “can i help you find something?” Faye nods and says “yeah , i need a ball gown.” The clerk says” right this way.” Faye follows the clerk. She sees all different kinds of gowns. Then she tells the clerk ” I like this one,the pink one. ” I want to try it on.” So, she goes to the dressing room and puts it on and comes out. Hitori just looks at her and smiles saying” you look beautiful.” She says “thank you.” Then goes back into the dressing room and changes. She comes out holding the dress. Hitori says” lets get it.” She smiles and says ” ok, thank you.” Time passes by and they are at the party. Hitori leans close to Faye’s ear and whispers” you look so very beautiful.” Faye blushes and softly says “thank you and you look very handsome.” He says, “thank you.” Then one of his teachers walks up to him saying “Hello there Hitori and who is this beautiful young lady with you?” Hitori smiles and says Mr. Hill this is my, umm, girlfriend Faye Lee. Mr.Hill says ” its nice to meet you Miss. Lee.” Faye blushes and says “its nice to meet you too.” Then Mr. Hill leaves and Faye looks up at Hitori and says “I’m your girlfriend?” Hitori blushes and says ” well we did go on a date and i bought you the neckless and the dress.”She smiles and says “oh,ok.” He asks ” don’t you want to be my girlfriend?” “Oh, and we already had our first kiss.” He smiles real big. She says ” yeah and yes I want to be your girlfriend.” He smiles and says ” good,i’m glad.” She smiles back at him. The music begins to play and Hitori walks Faye to the dance floor and they begin to dance. He holds her close and softly whispers “I’m falling in love with you.” Faye blushes deeply and softly says”you are?”She stops dancing and says ” i need something to drink.” She goes over and grabs a glass ,drinking it fast. Hitori walks up to her and asks “whats wrong?” She shakes her head and says “nothing i was just thirsty.” “He says Faye did i freak you out about saying that?” “And saying it so soon?”She starts to feel strange and she starts to giggle. Then he ask “what is so funny? She shakes her head again saying “nothing is funny, I can’t stop giggling. Then she trips over her gown and lands right ontop of him,laughing more.He shakes his head and starts to laugh saying Faye, I do love you.” She blushes and says “I, I love you too.” A year pass by and they are out eating at fancy resturaunt. Hitori gets up and walks beside her, then he gets on one knee . He just smiles at her and softly asks “Faye, will you make me a honest man and a very happy one by marring me?” She blushes deeply and says “Hitori,we have only been dating a year and i’m still in school.” He says ” so, we love eachother and i can wait to marry you when your done with school.” “Will you marry me?” He pulls out the ring showing her it is in the shape of a heart. She looks down at it , then back at him and says” yes i will marry you, after i’m done with school.” He smiles and puts the ring on her finger. Finally the big day has come. Faye was at her house getting ready for the wedding and her friends were with her. They were all saying how pretty she looks in the pink wedding dress and that they wish it was them that were getting married. Faye smiles and says” i can’t wait to see him.” Hitori was at his house getting ready and talking to his friends. They were saying he is lucky. He smiles and says” yes, i am very lucky she is marrying me.” After about an hour Faye is seeing Hitori standing at the alter. She smiles and he smiles back. Hitori was the first to say his vows.”Faye, your the part of me that has been missing and now your here to complete me.”Then Faye says her vows.”Hitori, you have always been there in my life and now we are here and to share the rest of our lives together.” The preacher pronounces them man and wife.
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