One mile from where the pavement ends stands the old homestead where my swimming tale begins.

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  • Unofre Pili on Jul 6, 2009

    A heartwarming read. Quiet reminiscent of my childhood itself. Thanks for sharing it friend.

  • Timothy P Stavert on Jul 6, 2009

    I know just how you feel Phil and you did well as a plucky little chap at the time.
    You sound just like me learning from experience.

    I enjoy this series of your adventurous life.

    Best Wishes

    Tim

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 6, 2009

    This tale is enchanting, Phil. I agree with Unofre Pili, So heartwarming. I can’t stop smiling! thank you. liz

  • lindalulu on Jul 6, 2009

    Very nice…I have a memory of my old swimming hole too!

  • Duff D Moss on Jul 6, 2009

    There is a great motto there for everybody (how many people drown in life when that are actually only in chest high water), and what a defining moment that must have been for you. Great story friend.

  • joey manfredo on Jul 7, 2009

    nice recollection, kind of “documentary” writing

  • OhSugar on Jul 7, 2009

    It is nice to have such warm memories of ones childhood. Thanks for sharing a little of your memory lane.

  • California Dreamer on Jul 9, 2009

    Wow, great story, I taught myself to learn how to swim in a lake also, best place to learn. And my younger sister, one day, put her on my shoulders, and jumped off a boat dock, told her, learn or drown (as a joke) but she learned, I was right there, but she did great, and became a water bug after that :)

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 27, 2009

    Phill, that’s an interesting story. I love to swim. We went in the creeks, ponds, and rivers when I was growing up and when my kids were young. We all loved the water and still do.

  • ken bultman on Aug 20, 2009

    Good story about the good old days. Our pond was a hand dug catfish hole…muddy all the time.

  • revivor on Sep 28, 2009

    you have such an “easy flow” style of writing, that it makes reading very enjoyable – loved it!!

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 29, 2009

    I love this story, Phill. I was given a pair of flippers and a snorkel when I was about eight. I went under water and started kicking and realised I could swim.

    Christine

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