This is a flash fiction short story about love, sex, girlfriends and boyfriends.

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Frank Tarkington and Rita Marlowe were seniors at the University of Pittsburgh.  They shared a nearby off-campus apartment.  He was a Journalism Major and she was an English Major.  They had been dating each other since they were both freshmen. 

Now they sat across from each other in a booth in a bar near campus, drinking beer and waiting for some classmates before ordering a large pizza.  It was early Saturday afternoon and outside the sun was bright and hot on the streets of the city.  Frank and Rita truly cared for each other but after three years of dating their love life was in a rut.  Only a few customers sat up front at the bar and at the booths against the one wall.  Frank and Rita where alone in the back.  They waited for their friends.

Frank and Rita smiled across the table at each other.  They drank their beer.  There didn’t seem to be much to say.  Someone played the jukebox.  The song was Light My Fire by The Doors.  Frank looked down at his hands wrapped around his mug of beer on the table.  Rita was looking at her hands wrapped around her mug on the table.  The pitcher between them was empty.

Suddenly, Frank began to sweat.  He had an idea.  He knew it was a wild idea but he knew he had to do it.

“Hey, babe,” he said to Rita.  “What are you wearing under your dress?”

Rita wore a short dress.  “My dress?  My underwear.  What else would I be wearing?”

“Slip off your panties,” he said.  “Slip off your panties and put them in your purse.”

“Slip of my panties?” she said.  “Have you lost it?”

“No, I haven’t lost it.”

She looked at him.  Her back was to the rest of the bar.  She turned around to see if anyone was paying attention to her and Frank.  She turned back around to Frank and looked at him.  She began to do what he had asked her to do.

Rita said, “I don’t know about this.”

Frank got up and came around and slid in with her on her side of the booth.  They sat shoulder to shoulder.  He put his arm around her shoulders and held her close.  He put his free hand under her dress.  Rita slid down a little in the booth.  She opened her legs.  She tilted her hips upward and closed her eyes.  The palms of her hands were flat on the table top.

Frank watched her face.  She began to breathe deeply.  He went on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on until Rita’s body began to tense.  Her mouth opened in passion. She gripped the edge of the table.  She turned her face to him and pushed her open mouth into his shoulder to muffle her moans.  Finally, Frank felt three powerful spasms and a weak one run through Rita’s body.  Gradually her body went limp…

Rita let go of the table and turned to Frank and put her arms around his neck and gave him a long deep kiss.  After the kiss she opened her eyes and said in a low voice, “Let’s go home.”

“Go home?”

“We’ll go home and finish this then come right back and party.”

Girls Gone Wild

My blog is the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette

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  • Mary J McCoy Dressel on Jul 26, 2009

    Well, that’s a very bold thing to do! I wonder how many couples really want to do this, but don’t have the nerve. Hmm,

  • Guy Hogan on Jul 26, 2009

    Hi, Mary:

    Oh, I have heard of such behavior. It is not that unusual. I did it when I was a young man. Not often but often enough to be caught. I would not have the nerve to do it now. But this sort of behavior is not just limited to the young.

    Anyway, I never had the nerve to go as far as the couple in this story.

    The couple in would be more my speed, now.

  • LoveDoctor on Aug 21, 2009

    Lol. interesting! Very well-written:) congrats on earning your MFA in Fiction writing.

  • theSVK on Oct 21, 2009

    interesting Guy!!!

  • Betty on Jan 2, 2010

    Stimulating. Brings back memories.
    I like the story.

  • LoveDoctor on Apr 12, 2010

    I loved this story. It’s just wild, sexy, risky, adventurous, fun and daring.

    Thanks for inviting me to your page. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

  • Guy Hogan on Apr 12, 2010

    Marlene, this is one of my favorite erotic stories. In my stories sex is good. It’s never dirty.

  • Lelu on Sep 16, 2010

    Awww, this is great! I am an amateur (and I mean very amateur) dirty writer and appreciate your style…I will have to take notes!!

  • Carolyn Cordon on Sep 19, 2010

    I’ve read this story a couple of times now – it still hits the right spot! Nice writing here Guy!

  • Bo Russo on Nov 13, 2010

    Awsesome, in public!

  • bigpapadan on Jan 9, 2011

    Yeah, this is a great one from start to finish. Good job Guy.

  • Roe2115 on May 15, 2011

    Very steamy.

  • MissAthena on May 15, 2011

    Oh sexy! I liked that one!

  • Robert Heston on Jun 1, 2011

    I think you’re a master of flash fiction Guy. Good story.

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