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          *Creak* My eyes snapped open. What was that? I saw a shadowy figure at my door, the figure tried to not be seen or heard. He wasn’t doing a very good job at it. He didn’t notice is I was awake. He slowly crept towards my bed. I could tell by his silhouette that he was very muscular. He was less then a foot away when he reached inside his suit pocket. I leapt off the bed…

 

          Vrrrrm. The jet black SUV pulled up to the edge of the street, followed by 2 more. “We need you to do this clean and fast, just snatch the kid and get out of there. No casualties GOT THAT, operative?”  “Yes sir” I replied How hard could one 13-year-old kid be? The captain continued, “The boss wants the kid alive so don’t hurt him. We’ll have guards patrolling the area and have 14 more at you disposal. We’ve got our best hackers stationed at all the alarms so don’t worry about that. If you need any help, you know what to do. The safety button on the vest which will call for reinforcements. “We go over this everyday sir no need to be reminded.” I told him. “Ok, now you have to go through the dining room window and get past the motion detectors on the main hall, then you go to your left and climb the stairs and watch out for the third stair it has a pressure detector” “Uhh what about the camera’s sir, they’re bound to have some. “We’ve taken care of that, we added a loop so they won’t notice a thing.” He explained. “So after you get up the stairs take the first door on your left.” “Sounds easy” Then go show me private.

          I opened the back door at stepped out into the fresh night’s air. It’s a full moon. “Oh and private” The captain said. “Yes?” “I just got report that the kid knows 6 different kinds of Martial Arts, fully trained in Ninjutsu, Judo, Karate, Tae Kwon Do, Jujitsu, and some other stuff I can’t pronounce.” “Don’t worry sir I don’t think he’ll get past me” I said grinning. Just for some extra encouragement, I flexed my already bulging muscles. I made my way up to the house. Wait let me fix that, MANSION. The place was HUGE. I saw some of our people looking at a screen that showed the whole mansion in infrared. I walked over asked them if I need to know anything. “Just take a look”, one of them said. I went over and got a closer look. The place was crawling with people! Why did we have to pick the only night that they were having a party? “Are they having a party or something? There must be at least 150 people just on the first floor! “No, those aren’t people, those are guards.” The same one said. What kind of paranoid people were these? There are six guards in each room! “Which one is the boy’s room? I asked. “That one”, he said pointing at one of the rooms on the monitor. I only saw one person in bed, which was probably him. “That’s the way they all are”, I said. “What do you mean sir?” he asked. “Powerful people protect there stuff with all the hi-tech stuff and guards, but when it comes to there room no one can see what kind of dirty stuff is going on in there.” I replied.

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