This story is in answer to the challenge, "Rainbow and Damaged Goods’.

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Woodrow walked down the dirt road kicking pebbles and scowling. “Wish I could go swimming instead of looking for that sorry old pig, he mumbled. Wiping the sweat from his eyes with his shirt tail, he swatted a sweat bee off his nose. He had patched the hole under the fence where the pig had rooted out, and filled the trough with slop to entice the ornery critter back into the pen. But after searching the barn yard and gardens the pig was not to be found.

“Durned old pig,” Woodrow thought. “It’ll be heck to pay if she’s rootin in Mr.Wilson’s garden.” He looked up as the first drops of cool rain splatted his sweaty face. Gray fluffy clouds had rolled in while he ambled down the road mumbling to himself, and thinking dark thoughts about his wayward pig. Woodrow could see the rain following the mountain behind Mr. Wilson’s place and spreading across the valley.

Eyes scanning the sky, a smile flitted across his freckled face. “If that ain’t the prettiest rainbow I ever laid eyes on,” he grinned. “Wouldn’t it be a wonder if there really is a pot of gold at the end of every rainbow?” Thinking about all the things he could buy with that pot of gold, Woodrow saw his pig trotting toward him across Mr. Wilson’s pasture. Breaking a branch off a nearby tree he said, “Come on pig,” and giving the pig a good swat on his hind quarters with the limb, “You’re gonna be damaged goods by the time I get your rambling butt home”.

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  • 8Shei8 on Dec 9, 2009

    You have such an imagination Ruby!

  • ashan1614 on Dec 9, 2009

    Is this going to be the start of a short story? I hope so.

  • Brenda Nelson on Dec 9, 2009

    Poor piggy, she was having a good time!

  • ken bultman on Dec 9, 2009

    Wood;y and his wandering swine. How creative right down to the pesky sweat bee. Loved it.

  • Sharif Ishnin on Dec 9, 2009

    This story just shows what a damn good storyteller you are as well.;)

  • Val Mills on Dec 9, 2009

    Delightful. I like the way Woodrow’s pot of gold was the very thing he needed to find most :-)

  • QuinMonty86 on Dec 9, 2009

    Very descriptive, Ruby. I wasn’t ready for it to end, though.:(

  • clay hurtubise on Dec 9, 2009

    You sure hammed it up that time!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 9, 2009

    Very good story. I really enjoyed reading it.

  • johnnydod on Dec 9, 2009

    loved it ruby more more

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 9, 2009

    very nice

  • Valerie Curtiss on Dec 9, 2009

    You leave me wanting to know more. Keep writing

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 9, 2009

    A very nice piece of writing.

  • Jenny Heart on Dec 9, 2009

    Great one!

  • Lex92 on Dec 9, 2009

    what a wonderful story!

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 9, 2009

    Loved this story, Ruby. Hope there is more to come!!

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 9, 2009

    wonderful story! Is there any part 2 to this story? Really enjoy reading it.

  • Teves on Dec 9, 2009

    Great piece of work… Post your website banner or any links here to get more traffic http://www.articlespost.page.tl

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 9, 2009

    I like your story, like I like the song Over the Rainbow

  • Unofre Pili on Dec 10, 2009

    You write fiction very well, maam.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 10, 2009

    Wonderful story! *_*

  • K.Reshma on Dec 10, 2009

    Excellent story

  • Snooky on Dec 10, 2009

    Is that a true story? cause that picture looks like Kingfisher Ok.
    I like it.

  • AvantPointGuard on Dec 11, 2009

    I like stories about critters

  • PR Mace on Dec 12, 2009

    A great body of work. I love animal stories.

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