A sample newspaper article about the death of a policeman.

Patrick Maloney a police officer was murdered Thursday April 20th around 6:00pm at his home by a severe blow to the head.

Patrick Maloney and his wife were supposed to go out for dinner, but because Patrick was tired they decided not to go. As they were going to eat home Mrs Maloney needed to get vegetables.

She went to the corner store to get vegetables, but when she came back she found Mr Maloney lying on the floor dead and the living room ransacked.

She called the police immediately. The police examined the crime scene and told the press that “We suspect that a person came inside the house without attracting attention from Mr Maloney and using a large steel or wooden object struck Mr Maloney on the head. There were no signs of struggle and it appears Mr. Maloney near knew what hit him”

The police searched the whole house and the surrounding areas to no avail. So far the police have no leads and the murder weapon has not yet been found.

Mr Maloney’s death has left people upset and asking for answers. His friends on the police force miss him dearly. His friend Jack said “Mr Maloney was a great officer and a great person”.

Mr. Maloney also leaves behind a pregnant wife. She was very shocked because of the incident and was unable to comment.

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  • arthur on Mar 18, 2009

    hi, that’s a very creative article.
    good work

  • hfj on Mar 19, 2009

    Excellent article and very well written. Sad.

  • Kimberly L. Thomas on Mar 19, 2009

    True story? Couple of missing words/grammatical errors but overall it’s a good read.

  • stuart harley on Mar 19, 2009

    thank u for reading my work firstly and thankyou for being the only on to comment.
    i thought i would return the favor and read yours,
    good work, nicely written, coz i cant really comment on grammatical errors as i am prone to them,
    but over all a great read, well done

  • Bowler on Mar 19, 2009

    Nice. It sounds like it’s written from the perspective of the murderer because he quotes Jack as referring to his friend as “Mr. Maloney.”

  • craftygina on Mar 20, 2009

    Nice I had to read it all as was not sure what this was going to be about, want to know more now, thats how you get people capture thier attention

  • remoteman213 on Mar 20, 2009

    Nice work did you make it up?

  • kns1992 on Mar 21, 2009

    SO sad =/. Great writing!

  • McRuff on Mar 22, 2009

    did that acually happen?

  • imaginearea on Mar 24, 2009

    This was good, it kept me reading til the end…will there be a follow up to this story? Perhaps something showing how a clever detective trapped and caught the culprit.

  • J.P. on May 3, 2009

    Nice story good work

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Aug 22, 2009

    Policemen are heros; I’m saddened by his death.

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