A somewhat true account of how a horse trader dealt with a dead horse, a bereaved owner, and hard times. To what extents will a mother stretch the boundaries of ethics in order to make a few dollars?

Mom quickly explained the situation to Sharon and Leonard, and they put the head and legs in the hole. Leonard jumped down in and arranged some of the loose dirt around the body parts. He was climbing back out of the hole just as Rebecca arrived with her husband. My Mom started talking as soon as they got out of the car. “I am so sorry. I got out here as fast as I could, but Leonard here had already started burying Charlie. He can’t use the backhoe to uncover Charlie now, the best he could do was use his hands to uncover Charlie’s head and a bit of his legs.”

Rebecca looked at Leonard, who simply nodded. She looked down into the hole at Charlie’s remains. It was obvious to us that poor Charlie’s embodiment consisted of a head and two legs poking out of a pile of dirt. She looked around. I followed her gaze as she took in the trees gently swaying in the breeze, and our horses grazing in the distance. She saw my brother and sister standing beside the grave, each with a little handful of wild flowers. Then she looked back at my Mother. Time seemed to stand still. Everyone but Rebecca and her husband was holding their breath, awaiting the accusations and recriminations that seemed immenent. Her eyes welled up with tears and her chin began quivering.

“Oh, Carol. It’s all so beautiful! You have all done so much for me. I can’t believe all the trouble you’re all going through. The flowers, your friends and family here for support…” She was openly crying now. “You’ve made this such a wonderful, spiritual, moving experience! I could never repay you for all the kindness and understanding.” She turned and buried her face against her husband’s chest, sobbing uncontrollably for a few minutes while her husband did his best to console her.

After a while, my mother suggested to Rebecca that she, her husband, and my mom return to the house while Leonard finished his job. The three of them drove back to the house in Rebecca’s car. Sharon drove her truck, while we kids stayed and watched Leonard fill in the hole. My brother and sister put their flowers on the “grave,” and we walked back to the house ourselves. Leonard passed us on the way with his truck and trailer, hauling the back hoe. It was parked in the yard when we got there, next to Sharon’s truck. Rebecca and her husband had gone home.

I found the adults in the kitchen. There was an open bottle of whiskey on the table, and my mom, Sharon, and Leonard all had a drink in their hands. The relief permeating the atmosphere was so palpable, had I been more enterprising I could have bottled it up and sold it, and I’d be rich right now. At first the mood was a bit somber, but time, Canadian Club whiskey, and the immense relief of a disaster narrowly averted combined to put everyone in a more celebratory frame of mind. In time, this celebration came to be known as “Poor Old Charlie’s Wake.”

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  • SJ on Jan 14, 2008

    That was a good one !

    SJ

  • IcyCucky on Jan 17, 2008

    Wonderfully story..

  • Lucy Lockett on Jan 17, 2008

    If the truth be known….very humourous really.There is a sadness to life too.

  • Nick Kenney on Jan 18, 2008

    Very well written, Joe! I like your style…and welcome to Triond!

  • Dee Huff on Jan 18, 2008

    Brilliant! I have to tell you, I was holding my breath too.

  • louie jerome on Jan 21, 2008

    Great story and well written. My family also traded horse, here in England, during the early 1850’s-1900’s.

  • lanne on Jan 21, 2008

    Brilliantly written.I agree with Dee, I was holding my breath. Poor Charlie.

  • Nancy on Jan 22, 2008

    Joe, I loved it! I had tears and I was snikering more than a bit too ^_^ I could easily picure it all in my mind and I really liked it!
    Peace!
    Nancy

  • Liane Schmidt on Jan 29, 2008

    Very nice, well written story.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Eclectic Muse on Mar 2, 2008

    Now that I know I can comment, I came back to comment on this one. Excellent work Joe!

  • E on Oct 28, 2008

    Good story, well-told, Joe. Nice work.

  • CHIPMUNK on Nov 30, 2011

    brilliant read

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