I am Gondor, a fist fighter that fights to earn money, because his family went broke, and had no money.

But, I’m getting ahead of time, let me explain.

I was part of a noble family that went bankrupt.

I remember, when I was little my family was rich, we would have food on the table every night, combat training and most importantly they were able to train their child (me) the ability to have hand to hand combat training, which will prove important later on.

From back then Until one day his plan was finally realized, and when the king’s son was found murdered he blamed my brother, after everyone believed him everyone looked down at my family with no respect. Inevitably our family went bankrupt we had to sell everything and move to a smaller house in the village. Luckily my father was close with a local farmer who still believed my brother hadn’t done anything and was innocent.

I remember one of the local paladins hating our families with a passion,

he would spend days and weeks planning his plan against us. So, he gave us some seeds and showed us how to grow plants, fruits and vegetables.

Although we were growing our food we were still very poor, so one day on the way to the store I saw a couple of suspicious looking men heading behind a building.

So, I followed them and saw that they were in a fist fighting gang and betting on money, I also saw the local warden making some pretty big bets. After seeing that I stepped out of the shadows and after speaking to the bet arranger I made it in and started betting.

After I won a couple fights the warden took an interest in me, so I made some arrangements and made a bet about the freedom of my brother. I won the fight but, the guy against me was hitting me so hard that I got out of the fight coughing blood and barely walking.

After getting my brother out of jail I went back home and after my family finished celebrating about him returning he turned to me and said “I want to get back on the paladin who put me in that hell hole”

And that’s all I‘ve got so far, please comment what it needs, plus I’m going to add a lot more details (like how he freed his brother and the fight, plus fixing some loose ends)

So, please comment what needs to be improved (This is also Gondor telling about his life after a life of equal good and bad deeds in front of the gates between heaven and hell)