A short short inspired by a Lostash Picable.

I drove all night in order to attend the viewing.  I did not identify myself.  No one would have known me if I did.  I didn’t participate in the “doesn’t she look natural” crap but I thought, she looked as beautiful as ever.  I didn’t cry.  I looked around but couldn’t find any daisies.  Instead I found my name tag on a bouquet of ragged white dahlias.  I was angry but I guess it didn’t matter.  Family members were somewhat puzzled.  Who’s the guy who sent the dahlias?
                                          
photo by lostash

I did not travel with the procession to the cemetery.  Instead, I stopped off at Margie’s for a beer and a bump to settle my nerves.  Margie and I go back a long way.  We can pick a day of a week of a month of a year of an incident and talk about it a laugh.  She’s a trip.  She charged me for the bump but spotted me the beer and suggested the convertible might have belonged to a long lost cousin or somebody.  Maybe the lights were off  so he could show some slides or home movies or something.  Maybe I jumped to a wrong conclusion.  I began to hum an old Forrester Sisters song, “…too much water’s run under that old bridge…too many rivers …..”  I left for the graveyard.

When I arrived the crowd had gone and the workers were folding the chairs and taking down the tent.  Could they help me?  No thanks.  Want a bottle of water?  No, I’ve been hydrated in town.  Then I noticed something odd.  The dirt had not settled on the grave yet and most of the flowers had been removed.  Her husband, three children and several grandchildren had been there but there, on the middle of the grave, was a single bouquet of flowers…ragged white dahlias.  

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  • Mr Ghaz on Oct 4, 2009

    A great story and very interesting read. well-presented too..Thanks for sharing this magnificent work :)

  • ceegirl on Oct 4, 2009

    Great story.

  • Lostash on Oct 4, 2009

    Great piece, Ken. You always manage to provoke an emotional response on some level!

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 4, 2009

    Oh, what happened? That\’s very interesting.

  • Brenda Nelson on Oct 4, 2009

    Your stories are so well told, unfolding perfectly, I can never be sure if they are truth or not.
    A beer and a bump? Either you paid for sex or I have no idea what a bump is.

  • Ramalingam on Oct 4, 2009

    A very nice story with a nice ending too.

  • lillyrose on Oct 4, 2009

    That was a sad story, filled with loads of emotion. Was it a true story? The flower pictures were so fitting (well done losty) and the imagery was all there.

    I love daisies but I love the white Lilly best. x

  • deep blue on Oct 4, 2009

    Nice story Ken. I presumed your past has a lot to do with the newsroom not a word of the battlefield. Whatever, your narration just unfolds so cool and left me thinking till the end.

  • Marie Antoinette on Oct 4, 2009

    It made me cry, loved it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 4, 2009

    A very poignant write, Ken. I really liked it.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 4, 2009

    Interesting story.

  • Lady Sunshine on Oct 4, 2009

    Sighs…you really know how to pull at the heart strings. Great as usual.

  • Sourav on Oct 4, 2009

    Interesting article!

  • Mythili Kannan on Oct 4, 2009

    Very nice shot and story

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 4, 2009

    I love your story, Ken. It’s beautiful.

  • Ask Cash on Oct 5, 2009

    Beautiful story. You made lovely use of lostash’s photos.
    I’m not going to ask if its a true story… :)

  • wonder on Oct 5, 2009

    A consuming story with the floral touch.

  • Jane Jane on Oct 5, 2009

    nice story. you wrote your story well with great pictures.

  • strovek on Oct 5, 2009

    Nice story and also suitable pictures.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 5, 2009

    i love natural beauty as u depict really good

  • Sheila M on Oct 6, 2009

    That one gave me goosebumps…so beautiful and beautifully written. I do love how you do that….leave the ending to our own interpretation….very nice:)

  • riccardof on Oct 9, 2009

    A very touching and moving story. Thanks

  • Nadine Simone on Oct 10, 2009

    They say that the pen is mightier than the sword. You young man, must have have the sharpest blade out!

    Nadine

  • Jane Benitez on Oct 12, 2009

    That was so beautiful and I hope it was true.

  • PR Mace on Oct 28, 2009

    A beautifully sad story. You are a great story teller.

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