Rainy Day Man

Lady Sunshine on Jan 31, 2010

Tags: Dutiful, friend, Hotaru Futaba, man, melancholy, memories, Rain, rainy, rainy day, Rainy Day Man, sorrow, Tears, umbrella

Under you umbrella I stand.

The sound of rain
Echos in my mind
Drowning me
In sorrow
It reverberates
Shaking…
Shuddering…
In silence
Memories of us
Evoke melancholy
As unshed tears
Left unspoken
Drenches…

I think of you
My rainy day man
Your shoulders
I cried on
When my heart
Was broken
You always
See me through
Standing stoic
By my side
Underneath
Your umbrella

My rainy day man
You were much more
Than just a friend
You never questioned
You never strayed
Forever dutiful
Till the end
Oh, how I would give
- Give anything -
Just to see you
Once again
My rainy day man…

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Jenny Heart on Jan 31, 2010
Great free flowing emotions.
Atanacio on Jan 31, 2010
Wow Sunshine I noticed a hint of POE in this wrting well done
deep blue on Jan 31, 2010
Well composed and lovely lines.
VTech on Jan 31, 2010
nice , thanks for sharing
drelayaraja on Jan 31, 2010
Nice write…
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 31, 2010
Lady Sunshine, very nice and well composed poem here that is very emotional. Thank You for sharing with us all Lady…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
Sourav on Jan 31, 2010
Very well written!
giftarist on Jan 31, 2010
A well crafted piece milady. ^_^
RS Wing on Jan 31, 2010
Emotionally revealing. Nice prose!
biantoro on Jan 31, 2010
I liked this
Shirley Shuler on Jan 31, 2010
Hi Lady Sunshine, a very emotional piece. I can feel your sadness here.
johnnydod on Jan 31, 2010
Memories of us
Evoke melancholy
As unshed tears
Left unspoken
Drenches…
One of your best Sunshine
joyhyena29 on Jan 31, 2010
great post^^
ken bultman on Jan 31, 2010
How deeply you delved into your emotions to cry for your lost strength that is gone forever. Wonderful write, young lady.
8Shei8 on Jan 31, 2010
Wonderful metaphor!
Melody SJAL on Feb 1, 2010
Very nice piece.
LOVELYHONEY on Feb 1, 2010
ur the only sun that shines

of its own volition

when will u come out

with ur sole edition
lhlhlh
AlmaG on Feb 1, 2010
I love it.. it’s so beautiful Lady sunshine
T. S. GARP on Feb 7, 2010
Good one!

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