His eyes were drawn to the crimson.

“Red bra.”

The young woman smiled coyly and giggled, resting her head on his shoulder.

He couldn’t get over how beautiful she was. His eyes were busy exploring every curve of her body, taking a special interest in her bosom. He noticed her red bra peeking out from the decorative hole of her top, teasing him ever so innocently. He wraps a possessive arm around her.

She’s mine…all mine, he thought, brushing his lips on her forehead. She expels a contented sigh, nestling close to him as possible.

“I love you,” she whispered softly.

He tightens his arm around her, afraid she might disappear from him, like a beautiful mirage. 

“And I love you,” his voice shaking. He was going to do everything in his power to keep her safe and happy. He swore it. He wasn’t going to mess this up.

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Comments (14)
  • Larry Fish on Dec 2, 2010

    Well said Sunshine, good writing.

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 2, 2010

    Red or black are no doubt the best colors for a bra.

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 2, 2010

    Red or black are no doubt the best colors for a bra. It is usually a good idea to let the reader know where the action is taking place. Are they at home, his place, her place…See what I mean? One sentence would do it.

  • T.S. Lewis on Dec 2, 2010

    Touching piece

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 2, 2010

    Such a beautiful and romantic piece.

    Christine

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 2, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, this is a very romantic piece. It didn’t matter to me where the action is taking place, I just enjoyed the read!

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 2, 2010

    Sweet, lovely, romantic!

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 2, 2010

    This is a very lovely poem. I have my sexy santa clause suit still hanging and waiting in my closet. lol.

  • Love Nancy on Dec 2, 2010

    Great Share. Thanks!

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Dec 3, 2010

    Very romantic.

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 4, 2010

    Sweet and sensual :)

  • papaleng on Dec 4, 2010

    I expected Mina.. but still it is a very sweet and romantic poem.

  • Nightangel on Dec 4, 2010

    Once again you impress me with your writing. Nice romantic piece.

  • Erin Miller on Feb 5, 2011

    Too sappy for me but a good piece for Valentine’s day.

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