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Another typical day for Juan and Pedro, let us follow their conversation while on breaktime. . .

 

Juan:   Pedro, c’mon you look terrible today and your stench oh, my…you could light up a candle with your breath. You’re reeking with whiskey my friend.

Pedro:  You’re right, Juan. You see yesterday was payday and as I was on my way home to ‘remit’ my pay to Choleng, Tomas suddenly cut my way and told me it was Jose’s birthday.

Juan: So it was a birthday. I suppose Jose spent for everything so what was the worry?

Pedro: That was the sad part Juan. When everything was consumed on the table, the group opted for an extension at the beerhouse on the next block so that was my remorse.

Juan: So, what about it? Don’t tell me you paid for everything afterwards.

Pedro:  Unfortunately, I did. I was so dead drunk that I have wasted out all that was inside my wallet. Choleng was so mad at me when I got home just this morning so I didn’t even have a bath before I left to work. Repentance really comes last so I have lived up to that example.

Juan: Oh my, Pedro. A month’s salary just for a night and you barely knew it happened with a bad headache in the morning? But repentance doesn’t always comes last, it depends on the situation.

Pedro: There you are again, don’t tell me one of those tricks when I’m in a bad mood.

Juan:  No, I’m not kidding, this actually happened.  Repentance that comes first, I knew you’re curious how it happened.

Pedro: Okay, I have nothing left to lose. Tell me.

Juan:  Here it goes, Tinoy was in remorse for  selling part of his farm to Nato at such low price when his son was hospitalized.

Pedro: So, what about it then. I don’t see any difference.

Juan:  Now here is the catch, as Tinoy was repenting why he sold his farm to Nato, he was ahead of his carabao pulling it by the rope tied to the nose in leading it to the field for grazing.

Pedro: I couldn’t get the logic Juan.

Juan:  You should see the difference, Tinoy was in remorse ahead of the carabao pulling it by the rope leading it to the field so literally his repentance comes first because the carabao is behind.     

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  • lillyrose on Jan 27, 2010

    Great one Will. LOL I did have to read the end 4 times before I got it! :-)

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 27, 2010

    I think Pedro felt a bit of regretful feeling after his action. He’s always illogical in what he did.

  • joyhyena29 on Jan 27, 2010

    nice one^^kaba2yan…

  • giftarist on Jan 27, 2010

    lol :D

  • amandeep13 on Jan 27, 2010

    Marvelous

    Keep it up

  • albert1jemi on Jan 27, 2010

    nice story tnx for share

  • Atanacio on Jan 27, 2010

    another good entry my friend

  • ken bultman on Jan 27, 2010

    Heh, heh. Made me think, didn’t you?

  • diamondpoet on Jan 27, 2010

    So many still haven’t learned your actions have consequences. good one.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jan 27, 2010

    lol. My brain hurts when it has to think.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 27, 2010

    You had me for a minute, too.

  • MCA on Jan 28, 2010

    good story

  • papaleng on Jan 28, 2010

    LOL. good story. My pastor also used to tell us that repentance must come first, that is in the Biblical context.. Kabayan, alang bang kaibigan si Juan at Pedro, bakit hindi mo isali si Glorya at Noli..

  • devsir on Jan 28, 2010

    Interesting write

  • sambhafusia on Jan 28, 2010

    good job done

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 29, 2010

    i enjoyed it….good….

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