Hah! I was wondering if Edwin would show up. These are not the sort of circumstances I would’ve predicted for his appearance!

Good, you’re improving on both the story construction itself and the niceties of writing in English. Indeed, you’re working hard on this story. A good thing too, because ironically on my end, it’s the adventures of Chris Alan Starbright that are coming to an end…at least as they stand. Details to follow privately, and as much as necessary publicly on my Triond page.