An auto accident takes away the person I was and gives me a second chance at life.

This was our home for about 30 years.

Mom was dying; stage four ovarian cancer and Dad had recently been hospitalized with heart problems. That was my impetus to move from the small quaint village back to the city I grew up in. At that time I had only a few days left to work at the retail pharmacy I had been at for seven years. The village I was leaving much to soon sat nestled in the mountains. Watching the huge white moon rise over the black cold lake from my deck was one of my favorite pastimes. Like in the movies, I could lie at night and listen to the different shrills of the loons. It was worth giving this up so I may be near my Mom for her final months. My dilapidated apartment in the city was already rented and was just three houses away from my old home.

Snow fell in a heavy constant rate, covering the road and everything in sight with six inches of white mush by the time I got out of work. Truthfully, I was often a fast driver, and on occasion still am: that night however I took my time, my mind was on Mom. I freely, no proudly, admit I was, am, a Momma’s boy. To be safe that night I drove well under the speed limit, had the fog lights on, and was using four studded snow tires in my new 1991 VW bright green GTI. As I turned the gentle corner of Route 16 a battleship of a car being driven well over the speed limit by an elderly woman came sliding sideways across both lanes sideways.

It’s funny what thoughts, and how many of them, can cross your busy mind in a millisecond. Just before impact, as I looked at the stunned driver’s eyes of the offending vehicle, my last thought was: This is going to hurt. The sound scraping, fingernails on a chalkboard sound is the last thing I remember as the man once called Chris. The first impact tore the muscles and ligaments from the right side of my neck and bunched them all together. Then my large head made contact with the middle pillar of the cute little car and I lost consciousness.  The worse was just a half breath away as my car careened unobstructed into a telephone guy wire that creased its way through the front bumper right on through the sizzling radiator. This caused my body, and more importantly, my head, to twist and crash into the passenger side of the car, tearing away at the left side of my neck, lower back, and precious brain.

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  • Evelyn Moore on Apr 25, 2009

    Written with a real sense of emotion and feeling without losing a grip on some dreadfully hard situations.

  • Daghost413860 on Apr 25, 2009

    is this a true story. Man, hardships, trials and tribulation
    that is what life is defined, I enjoyed the sense of sorrow

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Apr 25, 2009

    Life is hard sometimes, but just keep it moving on. Very impressive piece.

  • Brenda Nelson on Apr 25, 2009

    wowwie. I was in car accident too ages ago, but not of this magnitude. You are lucky, amazing story. May you experience many more pain free episodes.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Apr 25, 2009

    That must have been hard, and hopefully healing in a way, to write. Well done.

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 25, 2009

    Clay, If this is a true story you are the bravest person I have ever known. If it is fiction you are the best writer I have read. Either way you are fantastic. But I believe this is your own story. It is too honest and forthright. I know your mom was well pleased with her son. May I have the fortitude that you have when I need it most.Clay you are the man.

  • clay hurtubise on Apr 25, 2009

    Thanks guys & dolls!
    Yes, it is a true story, as are the vast majority of mine. Like Mark said, it is healing for me to write and I do it part out of selfishness and part so that others who experience such events know they are not alone.
    Ruby, I consider myself an average Joe put in unusual circumstances. I am neither brave nor a coward, but like most, I find a way to gather the strength when needed.
    Thanks to all for being such an accepting and supporting cyber-family!
    Clay

  • kate smedley on Apr 25, 2009

    You are incredibly brave to share this and also to have come through it all, I can’t imagine what you must live with on a day to day basis … what a testing and heart rending time it must have been. Love and hugs. Kx

  • Sheila M on Apr 25, 2009

    An amazing story and and an even more amazing journey. It’s wonderful that you are able to see the positive that came out of something so horrible

  • rutherfranc on Apr 25, 2009

    very inspiring.. I admire your courage and positive outlook..

  • Jo Oliver on Apr 26, 2009

    Writing often = healing. And, I hope that this helps you. Very emotionally stirring story.

  • Bick Parker on Apr 26, 2009

    Fabulous and well-written story, filled with emotion. There’s a valuable lesson here for all of us – the trying periods in life do duly end and from it we grow stronger.

  • Duff D Moss on Apr 27, 2009

    Far out bloke – I’m not sure why you get in a car anymore :-) Thanks for sharing such a personal story. Also admirable how you find that you are a better person for it, even though you suffer constant pain.

  • Katien on May 2, 2009

    Incredibly moving and well-written account. Constant pain is dreadful, hopefully with the positive attitude that you have you will continue to recover.

  • woundedsoul6 on May 20, 2009

    Clay,
    if this is your life then God bless you for overcoming the hardest hurdle imaginable. I too am recovering slowly from a head injury but I am walking, talking, and still trying to finish college. You are a very brave and very talented writer.
    keep writing. You have alot to offer…
    your loyal fan
    tina

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