It’s good. It feels like the abridge version and for this site I guess that makes sense but I hope there is a version out there that is full. Where all of the characters germaine to the story are fleshed out. Where the plot is followed and left and picked up again. Where the short story becomes a book. That would be a great read. Good writing style, it keeps attention.
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