60 word story.

She was an exotic dancer. He was disagreeable.

She was hot. He was fat.

She worried about rent while he worried about excessive income tax.

They met.

She’s adorable, he thought. 

Oh poor guy, she thought.

Both compromised. Both became saviors

It was all set in one fleeting glance

They both did each other a favor.

They fell in love.

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  • Puja on Oct 28, 2009

    Nice!!!
    Love it! ;P

  • vishakha on Oct 28, 2009

    ( They both did each other a favor.

    They fell in love.)

    The best!!!!!!! Awesome one dude

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