Comments on: Short Story: Butterfly Kisses (Draft)-revised http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft-revised/ Sat, 02 Jun 2012 01:51:28 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: LOVELY HONEY http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft-revised/comment-page-1/#comment-1006724 LOVELY HONEY Sat, 14 Nov 2009 20:11:38 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft/#comment-1006724 u r at the threshold of love many shall love to you woo start young your life is going to be loving too control emotion in excess and your lover will surely love u ur young u r at the threshold of love

many shall love to you woo

start young

your life is going to be loving too

control emotion in excess

and your lover

will surely love u

ur young

]]> By: jimbob1 http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft-revised/comment-page-1/#comment-997118 jimbob1 Sun, 08 Nov 2009 18:35:48 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft/#comment-997118 This is the start of what has the potential of becoming an interesting high school romance. Edited comments have been sent privately. Thanks. This is the start of what has the potential of becoming an interesting high school romance. Edited comments have been sent privately. Thanks.

]]> By: Franklin http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft-revised/comment-page-1/#comment-994872 Franklin Sat, 07 Nov 2009 04:33:51 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft/#comment-994872 Just keep going... write more... write, if that what's your heart dictates... :D Just keep going… write more… write, if that what’s your heart dictates… :D

]]> By: giftarist http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft-revised/comment-page-1/#comment-993718 giftarist Fri, 06 Nov 2009 12:42:32 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft/#comment-993718 Nice story! Nice story!

]]> By: NikkyLaneat http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft-revised/comment-page-1/#comment-992980 NikkyLaneat Fri, 06 Nov 2009 00:10:56 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/short-story-butterfly-kisses-draft/#comment-992980 I think this is a very good start to a very good short story. You have a knack for this... keep it. You're going to go far kid! I think this is a very good start to a very good short story. You have a knack for this… keep it.

You’re going to go far kid!

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