Silently into the night This piece has been dictated by my laptop, as far as style is creatively concerned. Does it merit a read, I wonder .Please be free to comment as you too drift into the night so silently.


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Silently into the night

Into the silence of the chilly night

With softest music did they us delight

A distant note on a lively accordion

Followed by a reverberation on a violin

 

Sounds of soft musical lovely notes

 To our ears were like soothing anecdotes. Sounds of soft musical lovely notes to our ears were like soothing anecdotes. 

Silently into the night they strung

Whistling by then had suddenly sprung Blowing clarinets from distant sand dunes were like variable softly played tunes.

 

The flutes’ chanting lovely musical notes

In the soft night were like sweetening quotes as we slowly sailed along the dance floor the night was so silenced, as never before

Besides the softly flaky white cotton snow did we dance so intimately, so very slow?

The soft snow continued to fall silently

Our musicians let their feelings

Glow so warm really admirably

Into the night we went so very quietly.

 

Into the drifting night the musicians’ melody all gathered around their musical rhapsody in the chilling Christmas snow did we sway?  Softer music they endlessly and tirelessly continued as ever so melodiously to play

 

 

 

 

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  • Reilley on Dec 17, 2009

    Very evocative. Nice job.

  • M Dalton on Dec 17, 2009

    Soothing , I was ready to jump into a warm bed and then remembered I was in Hot,dry florida.Thankx for the ride away from here !

  • AlmaG on Dec 17, 2009

    Soothing poem :)

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Dec 17, 2009

    Nice one. You know how soothing it was

  • redmail99 on Dec 17, 2009

    wow, lovelly

  • Judi Eddy on Dec 17, 2009

    Once again very good. Judi x

  • Roberto Sardelli 1 on Dec 17, 2009

    i really enjoyed this poem, lovely

  • LovelyWolf on Dec 17, 2009

    Love the use of metephors for the different instruments! Love it, love it! keep deliverin the goods!

  • Marie Antoinette on Dec 17, 2009

    This is so beautiful, it feels like music is all around you when you are reading it. Like music craddles you. Lovely, beautiful job.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 17, 2009

    Musical thanks
    To all those who have
    Read so far
    Let the tunes go as far
    As the deserts of Sahara and beyond
    My music is sound,
    No silent mirage,
    Peep in softly and join the dance floor
    But don’t dare to barge.

    LOVELY and HONEY

  • Aiyanna on Dec 18, 2009

    Beautiful and soothing!!! :)

  • Atanacio on Apr 21, 2010

    wow very nicely written :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 21, 2010

    thanks I myself was searching for this poem .Thanks a lot for reading it now Atanacio

  • rajaryanme on Apr 23, 2010

    lovely lovely lovely

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 26, 2010

    rajaryan me also got it shyml u will also pl do try thanks

    Silently Into The Night/Authspot

  • Shamyl on Apr 26, 2010

    Finally found…
    A very creative songful rhythmic poem. You made me feel as if i were there enjoying the melodious notes in e minor. Good job lovely.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 26, 2010

    johnny i ve updated it if u go to my messsages or comments in my profile you could pick it up from there silently into the night/authspot lovelyhoney

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