Childhood sweethearts rekindle their love.

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Beatrice leaned back in the high wooden chair, pleasantly full from the feast she and her two guests had just devoured. The goose had been delicious, set off superbly by a redcurrant jelly, and the venison pie… well, it was seldom that even the widow of a moderately prosperous wine merchant could afford such a meat.

It was the Feast of the Epiphany, the twelfth day of Christmas, in the year of our Lord 1102. All of Gloucester lay quiet this cold January evening, muffled by the blanket of fresh snow. Everyone with family to be with was safe indoors, enjoying a hearty meal and swapping gifts in remembrance of those brought by the Magi to the infant Jesus. And for the first time since her husband had died so prematurely, Beatrice had guests of her own to celebrate with: her brother Robert and her second cousin Stephen, returned at last from the Crusade.

The scent of spices wafted under Beatrice’s nostrils, making her smile. Her brother had brought back a packet of something he called cinnamon, which he had purchased in Damascus and given to her on Christmas Day. Cecily, her servant, had used it to top the pastries which had rounded off the meal, and the rich smell still hung in the air, adding a hint of eastern mystery to the humble plaster-walled chamber.

Robert was lolled back in his chair, now, a half-drained beaker of Gascony red wine in front of him, snoring under the weight of the meal he had consumed. He’d always been a glutton, at least on feast days, Beatrice recalled. She smiled, remembering how Stephen had had to rouse the hung-over Robert from his bed on the day they left for the Crusade. How she’d worried about them both throughout the years that had followed. But now, thanks be to God, the two of them were back, safe and well.

“Good cheer to you, Mistress Vintner.” Beatrice was jogged out of her reverie by Stephen’s toast, as he raised his beaker and drained the last of his wine. “And thank you for inviting me over for this superb meal.”

“You are always welcome here, my dear cousin,” she replied, most genuinely. “How could I let a childhood friend spend this feast day alone?”

Stephen’s parents had passed away whilst he was abroad serving in the Crusade as a sergeant in the retinue of the younger brother of the Earl of Gloucester.

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  • shakugan123 on Dec 6, 2010

    Where did you get those names?

  • Bruce Officer on Dec 6, 2010

    Beatrice, Robert, Stephen and Cecily are fictional people, not based on any real historical people. The men\’s names I chose myself. I looked up several websites for women\’s names that were in use in the Medieval period. I can\’t remember which website I ended up choosing from. Surnames weren\’t in regular use that early in the Middle Ages in England, but people often had extra nicknames or names based on their profession or other distinguishing features to differentiate them from other people with the same forename. I chose Vintner (wine maker or wine seller) as a fairly plausible one given that Gloucester was an inland estuary port with trading links to the Continent. There was an Earldom of Gloucester, but I have no idea whether his younger brother went on the First Crusade – that little fact is made up completely!

  • richardpeeej on Dec 6, 2010

    My word this is somewhat of an epic my friend. i did enjoy reading it though, you captured the mood perfectly. A good Christmas dinner followed by a little sleep is very topical for this time of year. I am sure that there are many that will subscribe to this ( me included) . well written….keep posting……Richard ;-)

  • Bruce Officer on Dec 6, 2010

    Epic? It’s only about 1,450 words, barely enough to even qualify as a short story! It’s certainly not flash fiction, but it’s not meant to be. Glad you enjoyed it, though.

  • aimsteel on Dec 7, 2010

    Wow, this is kind of romantic and warm. I fell in love with this! Awesome!

  • Freethinking on Dec 7, 2010

    Beautiful article. Thank you.

  • Carolyn Cordon on Dec 7, 2010

    This is a lovely touching story. The people in it seemed real, the details added to the story and the ending was beautiful. Thank you for bring this tale to my notice, Bruce!

  • Karonher on Dec 7, 2010

    Poor Beatrice – glad we dont live in those times.

  • Raene Kaleinani on Dec 8, 2010

    Bruce, I really enjoyed your story. Very detailed. Pls. write more of these.

  • lillyrose on Dec 8, 2010

    Oh that was so refreshing! I loved the characters and the setting. The snippets of past information helped unravel the scene perfectly. I am not normally a romantic person but stories set around this time period do make for heart felt romance even though times must have been so hard. I used to read lots of Catherine Cookson as a pre-teen, courtesy of my mother.

    Fantastic write Bruce and so nice to read some historical English fiction.

  • gb1269 on Dec 8, 2010

    nice story..it’s a valuable time to read

  • Agrippina on Dec 8, 2010

    Great atmosphere you captured here, congratulations! And I’m not the kind who falls for a Christmas story easily. For a piece of good historical fiction, maybe :)

  • The Quail 1957 on Dec 8, 2010

    Great beginning to an epic adventure/romance novel. My Novel the one you commented on is over 46,000 words and is still growing too. I\’ll be watching for your articles now as I have added you as a friend.

  • lxdollarsxl on Dec 9, 2010

    wonderful read – enjoyed it from start to finish – looking forwards to reading your work further back.

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