Olden times’ stories can sound ridiculous.This is true, he belonged to the family.

Sir X happened to possess some acres of land as they did in the feudal times.

He was stately and his temper matched his looks.He also had a baritone and acted on stage. Persons crossing his threshold were answerable.If they were not to his liking, they had to go the other way.

Now as it went, some members of the house probably, happened to express their heart’s desire to watch all the household treasures how they looked from a distance.So the subjects were summoned to bring as many wicker baskets they could to fill them up with all the jewellery from the iron chest.

Then these baskets were arranged for display under a tree.Everybody gathered to applaud the flash and glitter in the sun.

When ordered to put them away, the subjects grabbed hand fulls of them attempted and finally managed to run away, dropping some while escaping. This,one can imagine how much panic it created then.

One of those subjects, the last one in the queue was unfortunate and could not make it like the others. Sir X managed to shoot  him right then.

So my Great Granddad became nearly a Great Nobody after that. 

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  • albert1jemi on Feb 17, 2011

    Great work

  • tiffi on Feb 17, 2011

    very well written! Great share!

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 17, 2011

    poor last guy, He was unlucky. Interesting article.

  • giftarist on Feb 17, 2011

    Interesting. How unfortunate for the last one.

  • Tulan on Feb 17, 2011

    Love the moral of your story.

  • Eunice Tan on Feb 18, 2011

    Thanks for sharing this story

  • Dee Gold on Feb 18, 2011

    interesting story

  • rajaryanme on Feb 18, 2011

    Interesting write.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Feb 18, 2011

    I can just imagine the scene. That must have been the talk of the town for a while.

  • CHIPMUNK on Feb 18, 2011

    great work

  • jemialbert on Feb 18, 2011

    good share

  • Suni51 on Feb 19, 2011

    Let me see if being the last one happens to be dangerous!!! Hope I am not the last one here.

  • CA Johnson on Feb 19, 2011

    This is a very interesting story. It’s too bad that the last guy didn’t get away fast enough.

  • Goodselfme on Feb 20, 2011

    You wrote this with an interesting flair.

  • DeeJayWTF on Feb 21, 2011

    Very interesting.

  • elnavann on Feb 21, 2011

    Interesting ending

  • The Silver Phoenix on Jun 17, 2011

    very interesting extract with a twist in the end. i enjoyed it.

  • nanny on Aug 29, 2011

    Nice

  • ankit on Aug 29, 2011

    Interesting

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