A story about an old man in Scotland who has cut peat on his beloved land for years. It is also a story about death.

    At the sign of twisted pines near Wiley Road, there lay entrance to a valley where miles of peat fields grew in the Scottish autumn sun.  Gentle moor winds cooled a man off as he cut patches of the rich sod for loading onto mule drawn wagons.  It took six, feathered ankled Shires, to pull the heavy sod-laden flats four miles across the craggy land, to their dockside destination.  Shires, who are noted for their might in pulling strength, were still used these days, days when the automobile had since replaced the many beasts of burden from long ago past.  However, now in the clash of the twentieth century, the scenery about retained its somber, old-world ring, as the beat of the loamy earth rushed nutrients in bolt action, to the growing things who were blessed to be in touch with the earth’s very life’s pulsation.  Nessie was somewhere in his loch and Henry “Sod” Fields slowly, but productively worked his way to the center of his land.

  Sod  fields, sod thatched roof, sod for fuel.  Thatched broom for sweeping the hearth, that doubled as a fan to blow the fires bright on a cold winter’s night.  Autumn had turned to December before Sod had realized and it was getting close to the Christ child’s birthday.  Food was a plenty as the beloved sod fields lay in rest until the first of May.  He was old, he was gray.  He lived in the fields and his name was “Sod”.  Not one thing more could he think of that his soul longed for other than his life long dream being fulfilled. A dream-wish where he rides out of this world and into the next, on a bonnie prancing white mare draped in the colors of Scotland.  His wasn’t a death wish.  Rather, it was an old man’s logic that all folks die and he was well into his eighties.  He figured he might be getting close to when there comes the time that old death would steal him away from these fields.  In a way he’d be glad not to have to fool with anymore new-fangled inventions such as the electric light fixture, with its hot or burned out bulb to have to contend with.  He didn’t much care for electric wake up clocks either!  And most of all, he missed the days of old.

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  • Frances Lawrence on Oct 13, 2009

    I enjoyed this very much. Perhaps when writing about UK you could use English (Scottish) words eg trousers rather than pants.

  • mo hoyal on Oct 13, 2009

    Thank you, will do. If you notice anymore I should change, please tell me, I would be very grateful since I don’t have the tongue.

  • mo hoyal on Oct 13, 2009

    Dear Frances,
    I was thrilled to hear you live in Cornwall. My grandparents were
    from there-the Pascoe family. They came as wee
    ones, first to California, and then their parents ended up in the
    Hawaiian island-stange, but true.
    I’ve always wanted to make a visit to the UK before I die so maybe
    one day I will get to see my homeland-it is so very beautiful from
    what I can see! You are so blessed to live there even if it is very
    cold! I do have a friend in Norfolk, Hunstanton by the north sea
    and we’ve been corresponding for years. Best regards from me!

  • mo hoyal on Oct 13, 2009

    one other issue-I didn’t think there were oxen to pull flats of sod and wondered if mules are used or would it be some kind of large horse breed that I may have missed out on knowing about. I sure hope to hear back from you!

  • Teves on Oct 15, 2009

    Nice one…

  • Valerie Curtiss on Oct 15, 2009

    Well written my dear friend, what is a sod broom? Not sure how one would make a sod broom… isn’t sod another word for peat?

    Love you darling, and love your writing.

  • mo hoyal on Oct 15, 2009

    Glad for that one-sod broom-guess there’s no such thing when you think about it, yes, I do know it’ s the same thing as peat, and I’m still not sure about mules-someone can let me know if they’re passing by, maybe Shires?? Help!!!

    Love you Val, and thanks os much for stopping by, it’s important to me!

  • Sourav on Oct 16, 2009

    Wow… that’s a nice write! I liked your writing!

  • lillyrose on Oct 17, 2009

    How lovely that was. I have been to scotland many times as I live in England. I have read the other comments and would like to add my thoughts along with the rest. The imagery was great and will be fantastic when you change the simple facts of the Scottish/English wording. I did notice that you used the word dollar but of course we use pounds. I think you are very brave to attempt this, have you ever even been to scotland? well done.x

  • mo hoyal on Oct 17, 2009

    Oh goody, another help. I really appreciate all this and hope others stop by as I’m still not sure about mules used there for heavy labor?
    Thanks so much lillyrose, you are so nice!

  • mo hoyal on Oct 17, 2009

    Sourav,
    I thank you so much for coming in to read, it means a lot to all of us and to have nice friends all along the way!

    Best regards!

  • mo hoyal on Oct 18, 2009

    Never been to Scotland, Lillyrose, but it has been a life-long dream to visit since I was 9 years old! My paternal grandparents were from Cornwall, so I would also love to see that part of the country. I would probably try to live there somewhere if I was a lone person in life. It is incredibly beautiful but I don’t know if I could manage the cold weather!

  • Jane Jane on Oct 19, 2009

    a great write from you mo. keep up the nice work.

  • mo hoyal on Oct 19, 2009

    Thanks so much for stopping by Jane. It is so nice to meet you and new friends onTriond! I truly appreciate your reading what I write.

  • Nisa West on Oct 21, 2009

    Great story! I enjoyed reading it. Your description paints such a lovely picture and metaphors are unique. I look forward to reading more of your work.

  • lillyrose on Oct 22, 2009

    sorry mo, I thought I had mentioned the mules! they would have used the heavy horse, shire or some other native heavy, certainly not a warm blood.

  • ken bultman on Oct 22, 2009

    You, dear lady, are quite a story teller. It got a bit weepy at the end but I saw it coming. Well done despite the techical errors caught by others.

  • mo hoyal on Oct 24, 2009

    Hi Ken,
    I was truly grateful for the friends who stopped by to let me know where the boo boos were-I’m American of course, and the ones who gave me instructions are from the UK, splendid people they are as you are also. Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate it very much and consider it an honor that you read my story!

  • mo hoyal on Oct 24, 2009

    Dear lillyrose,
    Yes, I believe I will change the mules to Shires, that would be more accurate and believable. My dream is to visit the UK before I depart this earthly plane, hope that dream comes true. My grandparents were from Wales. Thank you so much for reading and I do appreciate the help and very sincerely express to you and dear Frances, that if you see anything else, I will be glad for the corrections that need to be made.
    Best from me!

  • mo hoyal on Oct 24, 2009

    Hi Nisa,
    Thanks so much for stopping by and to leave your ever encouraging and wonderful words.
    I did go to the site you mentioned and read one of your beautiful poems that was corrected by a writer that couldn’t even spell, so don’t take some of them too seriously. I think you write wonderfully!

  • Ask Cash on Oct 24, 2009

    that’s so sad…and so life like

  • mo hoyal on Oct 25, 2009

    Thanks so much for your comment Cashmere, it is important to me. I noticed some songs you have listed and I would be very interested to listen to them soon, I just uploaded 2 more of my songs tonight and I hope you will someday have some time to go and listen to them, they are:

    MaMa’s Gone
    From Water Into Wine
    Topsy Turvy World

    They are logged with Triond and shown and played at Loudio
    I hope you will give at least one of these a listen as I’d like to hear your opinion of my music. Keep well, keep safe!
    Best,
    Mo

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 25, 2009

    A enjoyable read..

  • mo hoyal on Oct 26, 2009

    Thank you so much for coming to read this! I truly appreciate it!

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