A fan fiction story, that I wrote for fanfiction.net This is just chapter one.

A turn for the best

This is the alternate story, what if General Grievous had killed Obi Wan on Mustafar, how will that affect the Galaxy—will the Clone Wars be turned on its head from an almost certain Republic Victory to a Separatist Victory or will it not change the face of the Galaxy at all. I’ve added a few other new things to the story as well.

Dramatis Personae

Aayla Secura; Jedi Knight (Female Twi’lek)
Ahsoka Tano; Jedi Knight (Female Togruta)
Anakin Skywalker; Jedi Knight (Male Human)
Barriss Offee; Jedi Knight (Female Mirialan)
Cad Bane; Bounty Hunter (Male Duros)
Coleman Kcaj; Jedi Master (Male Ongree)
General Grievous; Supreme Commander of the C.I.S
Luminara Unduli; Jedi Master (Female Mirialan)
Nute Gunray; Viceroy (Male Neimoidian)
Quinlan Vos; Jedi Master (Male Kiffar)
San Hill; Separatist Council Member
Shaak Ti; Jedi Master (Female Togruta)
Wat Tambor; Separatist Council Member (Male Skako)
Yoda; Jedi Grand Master (Male Unknown)

Chapter One: A turn for the best

Obi Wan was crouched on the railings that hung from the ceiling, watching and listening to the Separatist Leaders talk and argue amongst each other. He had arrived here on Utapau, searching for General Grievous, who was now the main leader of the Separatists after the death of Count Dooku. It’s Grievous we need to end the war, the other Separatist Leaders will surrender, but it wouldn’t do any harm to bring them all to justice at once. But there won’t be anyone left to control their armies, Obi Wan thought to himself. Before Obi Wan had decided what would be the better course of action, the Separatist leaders were now leaving in a shuttle to the planet Mustafar, apparently.

General Grievous stood watching with his four magna guards as the Separatist Council members and the Viceroy’s new guard—Cad Bane, made their way through into the next room where their shuttle—the Lapiz Cutter was waiting to take them to their base on Mustafar. Grievous stood watching as the shuttle took off, and flew into the air and then space. His four Magna Guards stood on guard behind Grievous as well as thousands of other battle droids that were on this level of the city. Grievous stood silently in his own thoughts. So the Jedi are sending Obi Wan Kenobi to fight me, without that interfering Anakin Skywalker and is even more annoying apprentice Ahsoka Tano, Grievous thought to himself. He then heard something behind him drop behind him, but that didn’t bother him until it spoke.

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  • Xemnas12 on Aug 18, 2010

    Its good, obviously

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