A fan fiction story, that I wrote for fanfiction.net This is just chapter one.

“Let me go,” Anakin said. He couldn’t be bothered dealing with him, he felt his anger rising inside him.

“No sorry Anakin,” Jurokk said, shaking his head.

“Just let me go,” Anakin said. “Fine, I’ll open the gates myself.” Anakin moved towards the door, but Jurokk stood in his path, taking out his lightsaber and igniting it.

“You can’t leave.” Jurokk said.

Anakin took out his own lightsaber and ignited it. “You can just walk away, and let me pass.”

Jurokk shook his head. “Sorry, Anakin.” Jurokk stabbed the lightsaber, towards Anakin, Anakin parried the strike. Anakin struck the lightsaber upwards, that cut his arm as Jurokk tried to parry it but he was the one with hardly any space. Jurokk dropped the lightsaber.

“Can I go now?” Anakin asked.

“If you must,” Jurokk said, stepping out of the way. Anakin opened the gates, and rushed outside into the night.

* * * *

Mace Windu and the four other Jedi Masters arrived in the Senate building, and they walked down the corridor to the Chancellor’s office. Mace sensed the Chancellor sat inside his office, but his mind and thoughts were very hard to read. The four Jedi came into the Chancellor’s office and saw him swivel around in his chair to face the Jedi Masters.

“Master Windu,” Chancellor Palpatine said. “Did you manage to defeat General Grievous?”

“In the name of the Galactic Republic of the Senate, you’re under arrest,” Mace Windu said as he and the other Jedi took out their lightsabers and ignited them; all four—two blue, one green and a purple buzzing to life before the Chancellor.

“On what grounds?” Palpatine demanded.

“For being a Sith Lord,” Mace Windu said. “The Senate will decide your fate.”

“I am the Senate,” Palpatine growled.

“Not yet,” Mace Windu shot back.

“It’s treason. How dare you go against the Chancellor and the Republic?” Palpatine howled.

“You have remained in office for too long, we have reason to believe you are the Sith Lord that we have been looking for.” Mace Windu said.

“You are branded traitors of the Galactic Republic!” Palpatine exclaimed, and he stood up.

Mace Windu watched as a lightsaber appeared in his right hand, concealed from his robes, and he ignited it. He force jumped into the air, while emitting a loud animal like roar, as he swirled through mid-air. Palpatine landed on the ground in front of Agen Kolar and stabbed him through the chest so fast that, he didn’t have a chance to react. Kolar’s body fell to the ground; Mace Windu stepped back and took a swipe at Palpatine but he just blocked it and then moved onto Saesee Tiin. Palpatine slashed Saesee Tinn; his head dropped from his shoulders so fast, before he really had a chance to react.

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  • Xemnas12 on Aug 18, 2010

    Its good, obviously

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