This short story was writen from a two minute clip on radio 7. Check out the website to hear the begining and then read my story. The link is at the bottom of the story.

Subliminal

Imaginative Writing

 

The past few days have been some of the worst of my life. My honeymoon was destroyed and my marriage was history. All Brian wanted a good life. That’s impossible now. Its impossible now because…well because I killed him…

 

June 16th, 2006

15:35

The Bay-view Hotel, Portugal

 

I had just left  the room to go to the pool and meet Brian. Ever since that woman talked to me I have been doubting him. Had I read the note she gave me what would it have said. I through it out thinking it was just a load of rubbish, but ever since I have been unable to get it off my mind. What did she mean Brian was going to kill me. My own husband would do no such thing. Would he…

 

15:50

The pool

 

The pool was quite. I was nervous. Brian’s friendly playful friendly gestures were twisted in my mind and it constantly felt like he was trying to drown me. Five minutes and I wanted out. I grabbed a towel on my way out the pool complex and rushed to the room drying myself as I went. The whole time my mind was being torn apart into two murderous sides. One telling me to relax and enjoy my honeymoon, the other, more menacing side, told me to get out or get him first. It was a side that had never come out in me before. Something dark and deadly. Something more sinister than I have ever seen before. A subliminal urge telling me over and over…do it…

 

 

22:15

Room 35

 

All of that day my mind had fought a raging yet silent battle. The two sides had fought and one side had one I saw the knife in the kitchen and knew what I had to do…

by Craig Dawson

http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/b00mz47s

That is the link to the first episode. You can also listen to the other episodes so far.

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