Continued from part 1.

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I never thought going to church could be as exciting as my latest Sunday experience. After the priest had his homily, while the choir sang their chorus I also enjoyed the voluntary roaming of my eyes in all directions in the church. At the other left side of the isle, I found one reason worth to spend my lifetime in cloud nine.

I haven’t seen her for months already. I thought it would be a barely ignorable incident when I see her. But it wasn’t. That morning, I had an unexplainable energy but when I saw her, my energy soared even higher. On my seat, a lot of things ran in my head. I was so preoccupied with my overjoyed small plans I even left my celphone on the seat. When I joined the line for communion, there she was standing right beside me.

To contain my excitement, I pretended not to see her and looked somewhere else. I had to hide my urge to look at her and say “Hi”. But I guess my pretention was so obvious I almost felt the rushing of blood on my face. When she turned to me and waved and said hi, I think I freaked out. I felt awkward at the moment so I gave her a toothless smile. It was the least thing in my plan. But what happened just happened. It felt like everything went blurry except for her. I felt like a child who had just filled my eyes with the sweetest candy. I know I was grinning the whole time until I went home. Every person I passed by seemed to smile back at me. Or maybe it was just my imagination. Whatever it was, that Sunday was a blissful day!

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  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 4, 2011

    Great work well done

  • webseowriters on Apr 4, 2011

    interesting story

  • ChangeTeam on Apr 4, 2011

    Interesting article… Thanks for sharing ^_^

  • UncleSammy on Apr 4, 2011

    Nice Share, Thanks for Sharing

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  • Noisy Cricket on Apr 4, 2011

    Good for you, thanks for sharing.

  • Brewed Coffee on Apr 4, 2011

    Pambihira! Why did you not invite her to eat or something? Sayang bro, sinayang mo ang chance tsk tsk tsk. Buti di nawala cellphone mo hehehe. Next time you feel that kind of high, plan ahead….you just don’t know what other surprises await you :-)

  • Edsss on Apr 4, 2011

    Tama si mami! HAHA!

  • papaleng on Apr 5, 2011

    Bro, next time isama mo ako ng mabigyan kita ng on-the-spot tips..

  • SittieCates on Apr 5, 2011

    Nice. It gave us an inkling on how bashful you can be. :) Seriously, it’s a great read.

  • Starpisces on Apr 5, 2011

    so you are a shy guy, Franklin, hehehe….so interesting.
    Observe again next round, and once the timing is right, strike!

  • anndavey650 on Apr 5, 2011

    Awww you bashful bunny!

  • Charita Gil on Apr 27, 2011

    I have a question, Franklin: Sinadya mo bang maging magkatabi kayo sa linya? Hehehe! Hay naku, hindi ka nag-iisa sa mga ganoong experiences.

    Sana marami ka pang i-share!

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