This is a story about an awesome kid called Kurokami Shinigakuwa. His faithful adventure keeps on and on till he finds out the misterious man who follows him to everywhere…

This story begins when a tragety occured in Blacesto, a place in Australia. Kurokami and his family were there and a great fire ball poped out of nowhere and shot it at them. Nobody in his family survived except himself. He was known as “the cursed boy” after the tragety.

When he was 12 years old, he somehow had some speacial powers, it probably has something to do with the tragety happened 6 years ago for him. Now he could control any type of fire. Nobody wanted to be his friend because they are all scared of him and the villagers think he is evil.

Soon he left the country and went to Japan. He got caught in a fight with a gangster. The gangster pushed him into a fireplace. Surprisingly, he wasn’t burnt at all and in-fact, he got stronger than ever. His whole body was on fire yet he is still walking towards the gangster. The gangster let out a terrifying  yell and rushed to the exit. Kurokami blast a fire cannon towards the door and melts the door handle. It was probably over 2000 degrees. The gangster couldn’t get out and faced his worst living nightmare… Fire devil Kurokami!

The results were obvious, Kurokami owned the black and blue gangster with a flaming buttox! He went to Japan to live with his cousin. When the plane arrived, he saw a Lanborghini outside, and he decided to hotwire the car. He melted the window and reached for the lock, unlocked it and drove off to Japanese City!

To BE CONTINUED!

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  • Lary on Nov 21, 2009

    awesome story :)

  • Kakami Gerald on Nov 21, 2009

    thnks

  • Charge12345 on Nov 23, 2009

    i agree with Lary (Hilary again), so when is the “continue” going to be?

  • Josh on Nov 23, 2009

    That is pretty good! When is the continue gonna be out?

  • Gary on Nov 23, 2009

    Yeah Just like what Josh said.

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