Cool short story.

Super Mouse Adventure
By: Kols Basher

The axe came down hard as Sherbert jumps off the kitchen counter the ax left a big nick in the marble that was left. You see Sherbert, is a curious mouse and lives in a hole in the kitchen wall. Right now its lunchtime and there is a freshly baked cherry pie. Now Sherbert is one of the fattest mouses in the whole world. He cant help it he lives in a five star restraunt, there is pies, cakes, everything really.

Today was thursday and in order to feed his intense hunger Sherbert must climb up the counter and then he can get a bite of cherry pie. So slowly he climbs out of the hole in his wall, he is running, running, he jumps! Finally Sherbert is on the table the cherry pie right in front of his eyes and more importantly his nose. He takes one step after another slowly but firmly the wonders smell is getting more taunting, Sherbert is running now faster and faster, he jumps and lands smoothly on the counter the smell is overwhelming. He Starts to walk over to the pie but SNAP he is caught in a mouse trap, everything goes black….
“wake up you little runts, its time to wash the floors,” The sergeant head rat said.
“come on, or no breakfast. You need to wake up,” Some other rat said.
Sherbert was truly scared now, and thankfully wide awake. He was looking around for clues to where he was. And then he came across a pin on the rats shirt, it read: M.J.C.C. mouse juvenile correction center the most feared place by any mouse. It’s the place where all bad mouses go to be corrected from there mistakes, if you don’t work hard enough they starve you until you die. Now Sherbert is in a line to get breakfast. The breakfast was cold and it was a Brussels sprout omelet, the serving was the size of his paw the omelet was horrible. Once he was done with breakfast he was ushered off and put in training.

“welcome to M.J.C.C. my name is Ronny and you will be trained on how to clean floors,” Mice Trainer Ronny said.
“But i don’t want to clean floors,” exclaimed Sherbert.

“It’s essential for you to be free from this place, now first dip your belly into the water, second put a lot of soap on the floor so it becomes really slippery, and last get a running start and slide the length of the floor on your belly and the floor will be spotless” Said Ronny in a tired voice like he had said it a thousand times.
So thats what Sherbert did for the day, and the next,and the next. Soon Sherbert was verry tired and diddent even want to get up in the morning. But he had to, he was slowly geting stronger and stronger. The days were getting longer and hotter, it was turning into the summer now. The season for fun in the sun and frolicking at the beach. But Sherbert wasnt going to expirence that. Sherbert was spending more time taking in the features of the jail as he worked and noticed that all the windows were open in the summer and they were surronded by a body of water.
Today is July 4 2009 and Sherbert has planed his escape, he will take a boating class today, its a special class because you can ride the boat out to sea and watch the fireworks, Once the first set of fireworks go off ay 7:30 he wull jump off the edge of the boat and swim off the island to the other shore, then he will be free!
Sherbert is on a tilting and turning boat out in the deep blue sea. Its 7:23 and its time to get ready for jumping time, he is prepared with a scubasiut and there is a getaway car waiting for him at the shore. Finally its time for the first of the fireworks, BANG! there goes the first, quickly Sherbert jumps and lands in the water with a little splash. Good step one finished, no to swim across. There are fish swimming all around him, he talks to one of the fish, her name is Moesha.
“hey, hey!, HEY!, hello? can you hear me” Sherbert said in a muffled voice through the aqua mask he was wearing.
“How you doin little mouse man?”,”you need a lift, I can help with your travels”. Exclaimed Moesha.
“That would be fantastic!” Said Sherbert in a very excited voice.
Sherbert grabed on to the fin of this mysterious frendly fish and they swam deep down into the sea all the way over to the shore. When Sherbert came out from under the water he felt a scence of tention in the air, he quickly thanked the fish who had helped him and whipped his head around to be looking at the fastest sports car ever, a Lamborghini. The car was a bright red with a picture of a horse on the front. Quickly he jumped in the car, right as the sirens went off at the jail. VROOM! went the car as he sped out of the beach parking lot and into the street. As soon as he was going about eighty on the highway a ton of police cars were gaining on him. He still pushed the car to go faster until it felt like it was flying! Then in the distance Sherbert could see the drawbridge starting to go up, but he could make it the car was in 6th gear and going so fast that Sherbert had left the police in the dust but he knew they werent very far behind. He was on the drawbrige now the drabridge was on a 45 degree angle, the car only had 20 feet to go until it could clear the gap between the two bridge halves. 10 feet, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, jump! Sherbert is in the air, at first it looks like sherbert is going to make it but no the car bangs against the side of the brige and is plunging down twards the sea Sherbert quickly lookd down at the dashboard of the car. On the dashboard there is a tom of buttons, he reaches at one and all of a sudden the radio comes on playing Brazilian Dance music. Of all times this is the worst possibe place to be listening to dance music! Sherbert quickly looks over the dash board and in the vast array of events he somehow presses the right button a fraction of a second before he hit the water. A huge raft deployed around the fancy car. Sherbert is saved, up on the bridge there are a flock of police cars finally starting to drive away from the scene. Sherbert smoothly drives the car boat over to the shore and gets out.
“Finally im free!”Sherbert said.
Out of the corner of Sherberts eye he sees an old mouse.
“who are you?” Said the old man.
“My name is sherbert and i have travled high and low, in and out to get here.” Said sherbert in a matter of fact tone.
“Wow” said the old man, “i was wondering if you wanted to race in the grand road race?

Sherberts dream was just about to come true, race in the road race for mouses! All sherberts life he had wanted to race in the road race, inside Sherberts head the rocky music was turning up.
“Time for some Serious training”Sherbert said in a deep confident voice.
* * *
5 months Later……..
“master I am ready for the race, thank you for training me”Said Sherbert.
“no problemo mr.speed” said the old mouse, “now is your time”,said the old mouse.
In the backround Sherbert herard racers to the racetrack, Quickly sherbert walked to the race and got in his stance, The man in the stands said 3………2………1……… Go! And they are off……. because Sherbert had trained so hard he was fast and he won the race easly. After the race Sherbert had gone on to become a champion and got lots of endorsment deals. Sherbert was living the life……….
“Wake up, Wake up, Come on sherbert youl miss the buss” Said Sherberts mom
“what? where am I” Sherbert said in a Supprised voice.
As it turns out Sherbert was dreaming this whole time. Too bad for Sherbert.
“aww man”.said sherbert in a dissapointed voice.
The End

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