This is the first page of my notebook. I will post each page as a separate article as to make it more like a notebook instead of just a short story.


This is just a warning to any who has found this notebook and is planning on reading it. I am writing down my thoughts and views about things and events that I have witnessed. If you do not feel that you can handle this then please just put my notebook back wherever you found it.

As I sit here and think of how this happened I cannot help but think that this is not how it was supposed to happen. It just wasn’t supposed to be this way. The only thing that I would hope for was one of two things and they were to wake up and find out that this whole mess was all just a bad dream, but since I know that this was real I guess the only thing I could really hope for was for the relief to relieve me of my watch shift. I always had to chuckle when I thought of my shift being over. Mainly because then I was allowed 18 hours rest time. Ha who could rest in the times we were in?

I mean I had fifteen minutes until I was supposed to be relieved and the have time to rest. However who was I trying to trick. I would just take the most tired person’s spot and pull a double shift like I do every other night. Sometimes not being able to sleep and having great night vision seemed like a flaw to me instead of a great talent. Then again if it was not for my persistent watching and great night vision who knows how many good people would be dead. Heck this whole place might have been overrun by now. So I guess my talents are a blessing to this place that we call home.

Ah my relief is coming this way. Now who am I going to surprise by taking their place? Hum Wayne looks like he could use a break and besides watching downhill in the front yard during a moon lit night is not hard at all. It sure beats the sniper tower. Either way I have to stop writing now and make sure my relief is up to date on everything.


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  • momofplenty on May 2, 2012

    So far, so good. Hope I catch the next page and so on.

  • bryan21764 on May 2, 2012

    If you have found this and did not read the original post please check it out at the below link.

    Please like and also comment this article.

    Thanks and I will be posting the next page in the near future.


  • A Bromley on May 2, 2012

    Great start. Looking forward to the next page of you NOTEBOOK. I think you are on the way to writing a great book. Y have my attention. Good job

  • Dark Fairy on May 2, 2012

    Nice rant. I can relate.

  • Eunike on May 2, 2012

    Nice one…really

  • ashan1614 on May 3, 2012

    Pretty good thus far. Looking forward to the next page.

  • Safa on May 4, 2012

    Waiting for your next post….This is getting really interesting

  • sathi.k on May 4, 2012

    Thank you for creating and sharing your notebook. Great job!

  • Fika Thiana on May 5, 2012

    NIce… I love it.. Thanks for share your lovely post for me..

  • Marlene Taylor on May 5, 2012

    Yes, it’s good and has me wondering. What is this night watching for and why the towers?

  • gaby7 on May 7, 2012

    A great piece here friend

  • Gowtham Mandarada on May 7, 2012

    good share…!

  • qncai on May 10, 2012

    Like article, nice

  • Robb714 on May 13, 2012

    I am looking forward to the next page of your “novel” idea and the way you are making it like a notebook. I love notebooks as I have many of them. Great job B, keep us posted.

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  • avissado on May 17, 2012

    awaiting the next page..good start

  • Moses Ingram on May 18, 2012

    Waiting for the next page.

  • Martin Kloess on May 18, 2012

    thank you

  • mohitraj321 on May 18, 2012

    nice one

  • misterdd on May 19, 2012

    thanks for share. good work

  • jotomy on May 19, 2012

    good work, waiting for next.

  • mona rastogi on May 19, 2012

    good one

  • sheilanewton on May 19, 2012

    love this. Great concept. Went back to ‘you are not alone…’ to check it out again. Great stuff, Bryan.

  • qncai on May 20, 2012

    Thank share, like it

  • meandu on May 21, 2012

    Nice work. Am waiting for the next page.

  • Lynn Hollis on May 22, 2012

    Enjoyed reading page one.

  • bryan21764 on May 23, 2012

    I am working on getting the next page posted. Please make sure that you become one of my fans. As after next post I will more than likely only message my fans that I have a new post/page listed.


  • Socorro Lawas on May 23, 2012

    Next portion, please.

  • Safa on May 24, 2012

    When is the next page going to be published?
    Do let me know when you post it

  • Secre22 on May 24, 2012

    You have my attention.

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  • sujaysen on May 24, 2012

    Waiting to see your next post. Thanks.

  • Wrath Warbone on May 24, 2012

    Fascinating. Will follow. Thanks.

  • sloanie on May 24, 2012

    A good read so far,I’ll keep in touch.

  • Uma Shankari on May 26, 2012

    I read ‘aloud’ and blinked, then realized it was ‘allowed’.

    Let me wait for the next instalment.

  • tankermone on May 27, 2012

    Great work! I’m torn between whether or not you are in a prison or in the military, but I guess I’ll find that out later. I’ll keep reading!

  • Tiki33 on May 29, 2012

    Working pretty hard.

  • Jenny Lenio on Jun 19, 2012

    Nice style and form of writing, I particularly enjoyed the amiable tonality :) .

  • tash01 on Aug 12, 2012

    very good one,i enjoy it a lot ,thank you for sharing.keep up with the good work.

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Oct 17, 2012

    Very good. Do not work too hard, it is not good for your health,

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  • afaceristonline on Dec 27, 2012

    Very good work succes

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