Ebony is a general name for very dense black wood.
Amulet is a piece of jewelry that supposedly protects its wearer against evil, injury, disease, or bad luck.
Chaos is what ensues when said Ebony Amulet finds its way into the wrong hands. But that’s another story.

 

 

As the tips of the final rays of sunshine caressed the darkening land, a lone figure standing on the top of a rise, raises the trumpet to his lips and the sound of trumpeting geese fills the air. Shadows begin to move in choreographed patterns, moving forward as one, creating a creature of darkness.

A lone figure dashes through the darkened village then crouches behind the well while frantically   searching for a safe place to hide. Nora, the inn keeper’s daughter slumps against the cold stone of the well, despair crushing her under its weight as the dancing shadow surrounds her.

“Who have we here?” the booming voice echoes around the cavern making the most hardened warrior quake with fear.

“T’s the inn keeper’s daughter, my lord. She was found by the well”

“Remove the body from my chambers; you’re getting blood all over the floor”

Hurriedly the body is removed as Lord Dufflenose paces to the window and gazes on the Ebony Amulet which he wears on his arm. The heavy silver cuff bracelet inset with an intricate design in Ebony glinted in the morning sun.  It had been ten years since he’d taken the amulet from the Cave of Non-Description. He’d conquered every land he’d entered since then. Now all that was left was this one little village at the foot of his castle. But no matter what he did he simply could not convince the villagers that he was their new ruler.

“Lord Dufflenose a messenger has brought some disturbing news from the village.”

Lord Dufflenose scowls at the scrawny little fellow with the long nose and large ears. “What is it now, Victor? Can you not see I’m busy?”

Victor bows in submission, “But your lordship, there is trouble brewing in the village, a newcomer arrived this morning”

“A newcomer, you say? What’s that got to do with the price of dragon scales?”

Victor shuffles his feet, “This newcomer, he says he has come to enforce your laws” Victor peers up at his lord and master and begins to tremble at the look of outrage on his master’s face.

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Comments (22)
  • emmy19 on Jun 29, 2010

    WOW ! Interesting

  • Francois Hagnere on Jun 29, 2010

    Another great write. Really enjoyed, my friend.
    Take care.

  • yes me on Jun 29, 2010

    Well, done you: you clever thing you…. that was great! bet the kids had a great Time, listening to that on a camp night….by the fire great, loved it Belle cheers.

  • Butterfly Musings on Jun 29, 2010

    wow I love the imagery, the read is like reading from a novel, great talent you have:}

  • oldster on Jun 29, 2010

    Be flayed – be very well flayed, for when Belle sets her mind to wit, nobody is safe from her tales. Should she pluck you from the crowd, your fate is sealed. Her spelling words lead you cunningly through your demise, and ultimate doom.
    Stirring stuff Belle ;-)

  • davangdi on Jun 29, 2010

    Nice story, my friend. Keep up the great work =)

  • LaAuteur on Jun 30, 2010

    Nice story! Very well-thought and interesting.

    Unique character names too! :D

  • TwiKnight on Jul 1, 2010

    Dufflenose… LOL! I could never come up with such a plot as complex and unorthodox as yours, and I think no one could too. Great write!

  • drelayaraja on Jul 6, 2010

    Lovely way of story telling. Liked it

  • XXElleXX on Jul 6, 2010

    Ooo Belle .. this is one of your best my friend .. a wonderful, witty tale that made me smile :-) x

  • write4money on Jul 7, 2010

    I read your articles are well received little new information. Your best hope of further articles.

  • Cebah on Jul 7, 2010

    Great story and an enjoyable read! Well done :)

  • LCM Linda on Jul 7, 2010

    Belinda, good story and I enjoy reading it. Well done. :)

  • Katie Marie on Jul 7, 2010

    Good writing!

  • wordperson on Jul 8, 2010

    A well written tale with a great twist in the end.

  • RS Wing on Jul 8, 2010

    You’re a great storyteller, Belle. It was a bit dark and very humorous. How the tables get turned in the midst of hypocrisy. I bet the croc’s were very well fed as the Lord can’t keep killing the messengers. Cool read and excellent write. Thumbs up challenge entry.

  • Duff D Moss on Jul 8, 2010

    Lord Dufflenose! LMAO. That was great – great fun – and the irony of his dastardly ways!

    Well done. Thanks for playing. Loved it.

  • Abhipray Sahoo on Jul 9, 2010

    WOW! Excellent piece of work! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

  • Atanacio on Jul 9, 2010

    a very good entry

  • BradONeill on Jul 13, 2010

    interesting tale, with a twist. i was a little lost at how the inn keepers daughter became a body? but i enjoyed the telling of the tale.

  • maranatha on Jul 26, 2010

    Yeah, the innkeeper’s daughter’s despair confused me too. Good story, though! I like the twist!

  • amethgr8 on Jul 29, 2010

    thanks for the read. :)

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