A sorry tale of addiction and how far an addict will go to get a hit!

The Addict!

Steve pushed open the door very slowly as to not make the door chime indicator sound. Steve trod carefully and he fingered the trigger in his right jacket pocket. Suddenly the owner stood up!

“Steve what are you doing here? You have been banned!”

Steve just shook his head slowly from side to side but did not say a word. The owner spoke again,

“Steve you walk out the door right now and I’ll forget this ever happened ok?”

Steve spoke,

“No can do boss I need it, I need it so bad give me it now!”

The owner stood his ground and tried to talk Steve down,

“Look at the state of you man! You haven’t washed in God knows how long, your teeth are falling out! Get a grip man before its too late! A few weeks in hospital with proper food and I’m sure you’ll pull through. Look I’ll even run you to the hospital myself”

Steve clicked the trigger in his pocket but nothing happened. Steve spoke again,

“You give them else I’ll just steal them, I have the money in my pocket see”

Steve threw down a few crumpled notes and coins towards the owner. The owner spoke,

“That’s not enough what about what you owe me? That just cant be cancelled by a few quid now can it!”

Steve’s jaw tightened and he spoke through tightened lips,

“Give it to me now or this will get ugly I swear to God!”

Slowly very slowly the owner reached behind and onto the top shelf and brought out the Chocolate Éclairs! The owner spoke,

“I’m giving 4oz only and you promise to go see the dentist?”

Steve nodded but never took his eyes off the Éclairs! Steve spoke as he pulled out the empty Tic-Tac trigger operated dispenser from his right pocket,

“And fill this up please!”

                                  The End

Lord Banks

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  • UncleSammy on Jan 18, 2011

    Good one , thanks and see you around

  • gaby7 on Jan 18, 2011

    Nice fiction!

  • pattiann on Jan 18, 2011

    Great story. I would have never guessed the ending! Fantastic

  • CHIPMUNK on Jan 18, 2011

    well informed

  • PR Mace on Jan 18, 2011

    That was fun and not what one would think it was going to be about by the title. Good work.

  • AnglaHodge on Jan 18, 2011

    What a treat! Addicted. Poignant!!!

  • albert1jemi on Jan 19, 2011

    thanks for sharing.

  • jimbob1 on Jan 19, 2011

    DLB…This was terrible and mean!!! I was getting all tensed up…anticipating the worst…I was holding my breath…the hair was starting to rise on my arms…all for four ounces of Chocolate Elairs!!! Now that was pretty darn good I have to admit and of course it warranted my I Like It vote…Thanks and take care…

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 19, 2011

    Very good!

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