Fantasy-Science Fiction, this a beginning story idea.

Chapter 1

In the vastness of space, a time billions of light years away there is a planet. It is full of life and energy with civilizations that lived and work together in such harmony. They live by simple rules. These rules are; bring no harm to any one for if you do the consequences are death. Bring no harm to any one property for the consequence is death. Create by building to better all civilization and you will be rewarded. These simple rules have kept this world at peace for many generations. Before these rules this world had been in turmoil. Hatred ruled the lands and the people felt no other purpose. Wars, murder, pillaging, rape, the most unimaginable things occurring. The people lost all hope of continuing without war. In the midst of their decline, one rose up and had seen that change was needed if they were to continue as a species. A species with such intelligence should not behave in this fashion, he had thought to himself while defending his family and property. From the point of his blade about to pierce another mans throat he cries out, “ I have had enough of this. You, I hold my blade to your throat, do you surrender? If you do not; you will die.” The man cries out, “ I do not wish to die. I try to fend for my family as you do. I know no other way. Forgive me, set me free and I will serve.” The one that is to serve is Krayne. He vows loyalty to Kronos, the man who speared his life. Together they bring together a plan to unite the people. Over the years they bring together three others. They are Sag, with his knowledge and skills; brings together armies to defend the less fortunate. Pi with his abilities to understanding the stars and rules of the universe. The final member is Thyme. He is peaceful, gentle, soft spoken and is a voice of reason for Kronos. When these five come together they bring a sense of unity. Their one objective is to bring peace to their planet and people. Kronos had thought of the rules to live by and the others agreed that these rules will not be debated by anyone for if they were they felt it would bring chaos to the planet. Many times Kronos felt that the rules were too harsh for the people. With persistence on upholding these rules he sees that the people and their approach to how they live, he sees progress. No one being has more than another and that they are more willing to work together. Kronos request that Sag continue to train the armies. Kronos fears that others may test peace from another system and they need to stay vigilant on their beliefs to protect planet and their people.        

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