Writing Challenge #9: A newlywed couple in rural Massachusetts receives a series of mysterious, anonymous paintings. Are they gifts, or omens?

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Chapter One

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Amanda stopped at the edge of the flagstone walk, considering.  She gazed around the side of the house, up the hill to the woods beyond, searching the foliage for – what?  She didn’t know.  But she had the distinct impression something was there, and it frightened her.  For several long moments she stood there, one hand on the gate as if ready to turn and fly; the other resting on her belly as if to protect the tiny life growing there.  He didn’t even know she was pregnant yet.  He wouldn’t be home for a week, but the larder was empty.  She had to get to town.

Mentally she shook herself.  There was nothing to fear here, she told herself savagely, and resolutely she shut the gate and walked the rest of the way to the car.  Still, she let out a sigh when the door was shut and locked behind her.  Starting the little wagon and nosing it out the driveway, she sighed again.  She had to get a handle on this!

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Amanda and her husband Thomas had married in Boston ten months ago and visited Popponesset Beach on their honeymoon.  It was a magical, pristine Massachusetts hideaway on Nantucket Bay.  The weather tended to be rather harsh, given to strong winds and driving rain. But when the sun shone the pebbly beach sparkled like jewels, giving way to little eddies through the rocks that harbored all sorts of sea life and shells.  They spent a fortnight there in one of the quaint little rental cottages, and resolved to return when they got the chance.

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Their chance came sooner than they expected.  During their travels they found a beautiful well-kept cottage for sale, and on a whim called the realtor. Sixteen weeks later Thomas moved his blushing bride into their new home, tucked away on the edge of the woods within walking distance of Popponesset Beach.  Amanda was a writer and loved the beauty and solitude of the place, though she knew Thomas felt a bit out of his element there.  He was a city boy and rather missed the hustle and bustle of Boston.  So when his job sent him back to the big city for a two week sabbatical, he jumped at the chance.

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  • Theresa Johnson on Aug 26, 2009

    i like the story can not wait for the next chapter

  • Melody SJAL on Aug 26, 2009

    Wow, that was a very suspenseful start.

  • Atanacio on Aug 26, 2009

    A good start it did what it had to do—- reel me in now I wanna continue reading ” The Artist ” Frank…:)

  • Katie Marie on Aug 26, 2009

    Yes, you have me hooked Maranatha. Great job and drawing us into the story and leaving us in suspense.

  • alc on Aug 26, 2009

    Great write and enjoyable read!

  • papaleng on Aug 26, 2009

    an interesting story. got to wait for the next chapter.

  • Stephen J. Ardent on Aug 26, 2009

    Look forward to the next part.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 26, 2009

    spooky, can’t wait to see what happens.

  • Eunice Tan on Aug 26, 2009

    Well presented and yes I love it very much!

  • giftarist on Aug 26, 2009

    Well written..and I’ll be waiting for the next issue..

  • Judy Sheldon on Aug 26, 2009

    You certainly have gotten everyone’s interest. I also am dying to know what is next!!

  • rutherfranc on Aug 27, 2009

    a new challenge is on? looks like I’ve been missing much.. agree with everybody here, you really brought the suspense out..

  • hfj on Aug 31, 2009

    Great story, very captivating. I along with everyone else is looking forward to the second part. Well done.

  • oldster on Aug 31, 2009

    Good canvas for a good mystery.
    Well done Marantha.

  • David Crerand on Aug 31, 2009

    Good story, hopefully the words for the next challenge will fit your vision for the direction of this story. Well Done!

  • Duff D Moss on Aug 31, 2009

    Ahhh you rat – got me hooked now. I want to see what is happening. Is it a painting stalker???

  • Rod Ferrandino on Sep 1, 2009

    When you started this piece, did you have more than an article in mind, or did it take you to where it left you off? As others before me have said, I’m hooked.

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 1, 2009

    A very interesting story. Hope to read another chapter soon.

  • BradONeill on Sep 1, 2009

    I hope you are better at finishing these than I am. LOL It is a great start I look forward to seeing just where it takes us.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Sep 2, 2009

    good begining..great narative and suspense.

  • Lady Sunshine on Sep 3, 2009

    Intriguing premise, maranatha…nice way to create suspense.

  • Tlchimes on Sep 3, 2009

    Very well done… You keep the reader waiting for more.

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