This is a story about a thirteen-year-old girl home alone and a stranger calls and says he is coming to get her….

I was sitting alone watching TV when it happended. Ring, ring. “Hello, this is Mackenzie speaking.” ” I am coming to get you,” the man says. I figure it is just a couple of kids prank calling, so I forget about it. I sit down and flip to another channel, ‘American Idol.’ Half an hour later the phone rings again. I look at the caller i.d. this time. Unknown Caller. “Hello,” I say irratedly. The man says, ” I am getting closer,” followed by a laugh. Okay this is getting a little out of hand, I think to myself. If they call again, I will tell them to knock it off. Fifteen minutes later……. ” Okay, look…… this is getting out of hand and I would like it if you stopped!” ” I am just around the corner. I will be there soon.” I lock all the doors and windows and run upstairs to my bedroom and call the police. ”Hello this is the 9-1-1 opperater, how may I help you?” ”This is Mackenzie Zimmerman on 112 Walnut Street. There has been a strange guy calling me saying that he is coming to get me and now he said he is really close!” “Okay, we will send over a police officer to your home to keep you safe, okay sweetie? Call us if he calls again.” “Okay” Ring, ring. “Stop calling me!” ” I am in your driveway now!” I dive under my bed hoping he can not get through the door. Then I remember I left the back door unlocked!For a little while there is complete silence, but then I hear footsteps. “Where are you sweetie, your Daddy said he would be late coming home from work and he said he wanted you to stay at my house until he came to get you,” the man says. No, I remember that is what a kidnapper says when he wants you to come with him.  As if I wasn’t in enough danger, my phone starts ringing in my pocket. I hear the man come upstairs, following my ringtone. Before I know it, the man finds me.” Who are you and what do you want,” I scream.”I’m your Daddy’s friend and he wants you to come over to my house.” The last thing I remember was yelling “No!”, but the rest is just a blur. When I recover, I am in a man’s arms.

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