The end.

THE COCKROACH FINALE’

It took awhile for all that crystallized sugar to finally fall off of us until then we just kinda lumbered along from the weight. A couple of hours and we were in full float again. We just leisurely roamed around enjoying updrafts and downdrafts. As we approached a very tall banking complex my husband was engulfed by a huge fire ball. I heard the tell tell sizzle as he was steamed into oblivion. To my horror the giant roach had stepped from behind the building and spat a fire ball at my husband point blank.

I wavered there in shock as the thing spat a fireball at me, I saw it coming at me, closer and closer, I could now feel the heat, closer and closer OH my Lord !–ring   ring.

Hello, Good morning Grandma, hope I didn’t wake you up. Can I come and take you to breakfast. Yes baby please do. Talk about saved by the bell. Whew! What a nightmare. Let me get up from here.

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  • deep blue on Nov 17, 2009

    That’s the best finale I ever read. My kind of ending. Let me be the first to give a two thumbs up.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 17, 2009

    well done. Though i don;t like cockroaches at home, I dissected them in my lab.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 17, 2009

    Six thumbs up. Or do they have eight? Ha, you that dissected them things, just how many do they have, them cockroaches? Coarse that dreamed up one coulda had meany as it wanted. Thanks, snooky.

  • Judi Eddy on Nov 17, 2009

    Very good, enjoyed it. Judi

  • diamondpoet on Nov 17, 2009

    That was a horrible demise, burnt to a crisp, I love your imaginations.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 17, 2009

    u have a cockroach phobia

    i have rats’

    please do read my
    poem

    RATS EM ALL

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 17, 2009

    That’s wonderful, Exactly the right ending.

  • Brandon Huffey on Nov 18, 2009

    LOL. As with all the other posts, I agree, great ending.
    Why did I not see that coming? LOL.

    thanx for the read Snooky!

    Start from the beginning everyone!

    http://authspot.com/novels/the-cockroach-part-1/

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jan 4, 2011

    How sweet!

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