A short love story.

I had wanted to ask her out for quite some time now, and I finally had plucked up the courage to ask her.

I was over the moon when she acquiesced, I can’t believe the time I had spent getting myself ready, I was like a woman changing my mind over what to wear, first this tie and then that, at last I was ready, looking at my watch I saw it was time to pick her up, jumping in the Taxi we sped off to start a night (I hoped) I would never forget.

She looked like a dream; I was amazed I had missed out on not knowing her until now

 She smiled to me as she sat beside me in the taxi, as we made our way to the restaurant, we talked awkwardly about ourselves.

The meal and her company, was amazing, so many times I had to pinched myself that this was happening to me, all too soon it was time to take her home.

“Home James”, I cried with a grin , and as we sped off into the night, my thoughts of that evenings encounter flooded back to me I remember looking into her bright blue  eyes as we ate.

Her legs would brush against mine under the table, and each time they touched, we would smile with anticipation both thinking of the “coffee” at her place afterwards.

We talked about ourselves and soon began to realize how many of the same things we both enjoyed I told her how many times I have wanted to ask her out and she too confessed she had noticed me for a while and had hoped I would ask her

We finished our meal and I rang to order a Taxi to take her home, as we stood outside in the cold waiting for the taxi I put my coat around her shoulders

I took her in my arms, OH! She whispered I have had a wonderful time, could it possibly get any better? Oh baby I thought it’s only just started, that was fifty seven years ago, now we have three wonderful children and four grandchildren.

I still think back to the first date of ours all that time ago, and how nervous I was and how in love we were, and I might add. Still are.

This is a story and not me… Just thought I might add that.

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  • fmakeita on Dec 15, 2009

    Aww.. That is so romantic.

  • albert1jemi on Dec 15, 2009

    beautiful love story i loved it

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 15, 2009

    A beautiful and very romantic love story!

  • ken bultman on Dec 15, 2009

    Nice story…could happen.

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 15, 2009

    Excellent. I love how you start in the present and then reminisce about the past. Also, how her legs brushed next to yours underneath the table leading to the anticipation of coffee later. This is awesome. keep up the good work:)

  • Moira62 on Dec 15, 2009

    Lovely story :)

  • elegantlady on Dec 15, 2009

    Johnny, this is so romantic, you are unbelievable. Top marks here. TY x

  • princessbelle on Dec 15, 2009

    Showing your romance once more Johnny, great!

  • landiro on Dec 15, 2009

    it’s 30 years i met my husband ..we were teen.. and we have 2 young sons now . i hope to can write a day it was 57 years ago…. tx for this story…

  • Suzi Que xxx on Dec 15, 2009

    Well Johnny,You Know Me,I have Tears in my eyes.I\’ll admit it willingly only cause if I didn\’t you\’d know I wasn\\\’t telling the truth anyways, so yes another wonderful story of life\’s traveled directions we never know where they may take us…..57yrs ago. That\’s what we all need to divert back to \”staying a lil ol\’ fashioned an sweet at heart with memories of days gone by.\” Thanks for sharing this one Johnny

  • phyllis on Dec 15, 2009

    So nice— I met my husband on a blind date , and have been married to him for almost 53 years– we had 5 children , have 7 grand and 10 greats ; we still chase each other around the house , and cuddle close– its still possible to find lasting love- :) – This ” story” is so beautiful–I wish this for you :)

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 15, 2009

    A lovely story. *_*

  • deep blue on Dec 15, 2009

    Very well told. It only shows time really flies. Thanks for sharing my friend.

  • mkd1788 on Dec 16, 2009

    cute story…expressed greatly…

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 16, 2009

    That is such a beautiful love story. How wonderful that you are still together all these years later.

    Christine

  • standingproud on Dec 16, 2009

    wot eva lol.
    Thank god for imaginations.
    Nice and more nice.
    Lovely
    Johnny

  • drelayaraja on Dec 16, 2009

    great one

  • Papa Sparks on Dec 16, 2009

    This was quite endearing and enjoyable to read.

  • magicdarts on Dec 16, 2009

    there is nothing quite like looking back on the beginnings of relationships – great piece!

  • lillyrose on Dec 16, 2009

    That was so beautiful! I have goose bumps and a tear in my eye!

    Who said romance is dead! x

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 16, 2009

    This was so lovely and beautiful John John.

  • Moneypenny on Dec 16, 2009

    Wonderful! As always Johnny……

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 18, 2009

    just beautiful

  • hollynoel001 on Dec 19, 2009

    this could happen to you and your loved one!!! great story as always your writings Rock!!!

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