A true story about lives in Vancouver, BC. Written for Duffs writting challenge.

 

This is a true story. It took place in the very early 1990’s. I had left my family in Alberta, and was living in Vancouver, BC. Although this port city has been described as beautiful, I found it to be a showcase of stereotypes. A shocking reminder that the rich are out of touch with the poor. Those who lived in the ivory towers overlooking the ocean had no idea what went on in their own city.

I lived there for about five years and worked as a waitress. I was in my mid twenties and of course wore appropriate waitressing clothing, skirt and shirt, shoes with a low heel, for God’s sake I was not killing myself in stilettos. I had finished my shift and was coming home. It was a hot summer night, I had a can of orange crush.

I parked on the street, for some reason at the apartment where I lived the automatic garage door opener wasn’t working or I would have parked inside as usual. Other than a few apartment buildings the area was rather residential and looked nice enough.

I had to walk a short distance to get to the building, in fact really all I had to do was to cross the street. This proved more difficult than I would expect. An old style van pulled up and the three male passengers made a play. Usually when this sort of thing happens they at least ask if you are working or if you are a working girl. When that would happen to me, I would just say “No” and leave it at that. For some reason, this incident was different. Perhaps it was because there were three of them, perhaps because it happened so close to “home”, or perhaps it was because I was tired. When the van slowed down, silly me only assumed it was to allow me to cross the street in safety. Instead they yelled out something like “How much”. They didn’t even have the common decency to ask if I was working or not.

 Hooker Tracks by telethon.

 http://www.flickr.com/photos/ryanjunell/382523918/  My neighborhood needed a sign like this.

Forbidden love, my friend, forbidden love, and I went nuts. I walked with absolutely no fear towards the van. Yelling like a mother protecting her young. I was furious at the insult (some might call it a compliment, but believe me it is not flattering). I do not remember my exact words but it was enough to put the van into a tire spin. The driver was in a hurry to get out of there. I chased him and nearly threw my drink at the fleeing van, but why waste a good drink?

I left Vancouver the first chance I got and although I miss the smell of the ocean, I have never been back.

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  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 11, 2009

    Nice one to read…Great work…..

  • raman13 on Sep 11, 2009

    Impressive work

    I like it

    Best Regards

  • JCHume on Sep 11, 2009

    With a title like that I just had to drop by and read this one. You probably scared those guys into playing at home for a while. lol

  • ken bultman on Sep 11, 2009

    Maybe it was the low heels. Anyway, this was another story about animals…just another species.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 11, 2009

    I am bound to salute you lady
    You have been the bravest
    Of the brave women of today

    No, if they had raped you,
    You would never,
    Ever have become
    An unfortunate prostitute,
    But a sad victim of
    Mentally ill
    Albeit ailing society

    I have great respect for you.
    For your composure of mind
    How glad I am to learn
    Women also can apply their minds
    Under diverse circumstances

    I wish more women read
    This true and real version
    The brave story
    Of an ordinary woman,
    Sorry,
    Extraordinary one

    So I convert my comment
    To poetry for all
    Other women to read
    As also to apply their minds
    In total personal self defence

  • Alanna Kierstead on Sep 11, 2009

    There’s always the east coast! :D (I live in Saint John.)

    That would have definitely been disturbing. I, for one, have never even been vaguely mistaken for a prostitute. I can’t imagine what that would feel like at all. o_O

    Brava for being able to stand up to them and scare them off like that! The fact that they took off so fast makes me laugh. Bunch of cowards. Fortunately for you, though, as they could have turned out to be the type that would rape you for telling them off like that….

    PS: That sign is rather disturbing…

    PPS: This is really well written! (Thought maybe I should actually comment on that, you know?)

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 11, 2009

    Very interesting story for Duff\\\\\\\’s writing challenge.

  • BradONeill on Sep 11, 2009

    Oh scary story. I am really glad they didn’t hurt you. That was very well written. I am loving the challenge more and more each week.

  • Tlchimes on Sep 11, 2009

    Wow some guys have gall. Glad you were stronger then the three of them – in many ways, at that.

  • Diverseblogger on Sep 11, 2009

    Very interesting article!

  • Littlekid137 on Sep 11, 2009

    Wow that is pretty scary but intriguing story.

  • Lostash on Sep 11, 2009

    Love the sign…..disturbing story!

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 11, 2009

    B, what an adventure. You must have been a mean looking woman to scare the daylights out of them. Yea for you. we all have to let off steam sometimes or blow up.

  • papaleng on Sep 11, 2009

    I commend you for not losing your courage at that time.

  • PR Mace on Sep 12, 2009

    Glad you where not hurt and they took off. It must of been your nude pictures that set them off. LOL.

  • Anne Lyken Garner on Sep 13, 2009

    Scary thought. I did giggle a bit at the picture. Very appropriate.

  • I Have Had Enough on Sep 13, 2009

    That could have went badly wrong; but I’m glad it didn’t, great read.

  • B.S. Kitty on Sep 14, 2009

    GO B!!! I think that you could have wound up worse off in that situation, but you made those men think twice about shouting insults at a random woman, I’ll bet. You are too great.

  • oldster on Sep 14, 2009

    Well done B–face em down.
    Or get a pet rhino?

  • Rod Ferrandino on Sep 14, 2009

    I am glad they were merely knuckle-dragging idiots, and not violent knuckle-dragging idiots.

  • miraj on Sep 14, 2009

    that was really scary,I commend your courage to retaliate.

  • DulceCorazon on Sep 14, 2009

    I would have been terrified. Thanks for sharing.

  • hfj on Sep 15, 2009

    Nice story B. Probably some young teenagers who had a beer or two too many, and didn\’t know any better. Glad everything turned out well, and you taught those teens a very valuable lesson. Nice entry for the challenge. Well done.

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 15, 2009

    I can assure you these were NOT drunk teenagers…they were full grown men.
    This was probaby a real turning point in my life as I think it was the first time I REALLY yelled at anyone. It was the moment of my first empowerment.

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 15, 2009

    Wow – one must wonder if there was someone looking over your shoulder that night – I tend to think that was the most appropriate response to diffuse that potentially evil situation.

  • Theresa Johnson on Sep 15, 2009

    next time they try something that stupid towards you just sick one of your pets on them…. great piece for the challenge

  • J.L. Eck on Sep 16, 2009

    Way to go!

  • Cache Ecrivain on Sep 16, 2009

    I would have LOVED to been there and seen you tell those guys off! I’m with you, I wouldn’t see it as a compliment–I would have been insulted too.
    Good for you!

  • CA Johnson on Sep 22, 2009

    This was a very interesting story. I was really surprised when I saw the title of it. I think that it is great that you told those guys off too. I’m sure they will think twice about doing that again.

  • jimbob1 on Oct 1, 2009

    B…powerful story. You are most fortunate that you didn’t end up among our 500 missing or murdered. There are so many unfortunates and I often wonder if all of our 500 mising or murdered were actually all sex trade workers or if they were kidnapped off the street only to be used, abused and then tossed aside.I’d suggest you head back to Vancouver and stare down the demons which may still be haunting and hurting you. Thanks.

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