In This next installment of the Flesh Beast I got a little creative by bringing the reader into the story by writing it in 2nd person. Rather than write the traditional 3rd following that everybody expects why not mix it up a bit and have some fun. I’ve noticed in most sequals or installments that the next composition is bigger and more intense. I wasn’t getting inspired to write anything traditional decided to write it in 2nd person. If I get comments from my readers to write another Flesh Beast, maybe I will.

The Flesh Beast III: The Snap of Your Bones

 

            You wake up to hear something outside the door of your room. It was weeks since you remembered the reason why you were in this hell hole. You were protesting against your parents for making you into a slave. You were right and they were wrong. Now that you’re in the insane Asylum for boys and girls you might as well make the most of it. You hear from the other children about a beast that eats children and you’re scared that your going to be next.

            Once again you hear something outside your door and you get out of bed to see what it is. You reach for the door knob with your nine year old hand and open the door. It’s Jamie and Charlotte and they look at you with a smile. “Hey, I heard something down the hallway from our bedrooms,” replied Jamie. “Yea, it’s probably the Flesh Beast!” yelled Charlotte. “Shh,” you say, “you want to wake the dead?” “Sorry,” she answered. “Quiet, I hear something,” said Jamie as he held out his hand. You become suspicious because you feel like your being toyed around by your two friends, but you follow them down the hallway. It’s very dark and you’re unable to see what’s in front of you. Suddenly, the moon unveils from the clouds and you can see what’s in front of you.  The moon is full and you’re able to hear the wind blow through the bushes and trees because the windows are open. It seems like all is well and keep following your friends who are in front of you. Suddenly you stop when they do after hearing something very dreadful.        “Where’s my flesh?” you look ahead to see a pair of yellow eyes stare back. You scream in horror and run back leaving your two friends behind while they scream. There’s no time to turn around to see where it is and you don’t care. All you care about is getting yourself out of harms way, but you hear a thumping sound behind you.  The ripping sound of a chainsaw the scream of one of your two friends echoes through out the hallway. You turn your head to see what it is and watch it tear the head off of Jamie with a single snap of its jaws.  You can see its shiny teeth run up and down its jaw bone and your skin begins to crawl.  The blood in your body begins to curdle and you can feel your legs become weak as it charges after Charlotte.  She screams and shouts for you to help her, but your body is numb and you can’t move.  You close your eyes and begin to cry as you hear the crunch of her bones.

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