Chapter 1: Getting to Know Her
Foreword.
This is my first time writing stories. or posting here. My first is an epic story and not just any story that goes out to the public, but a story that I just created which I want to share it with others. I hope you forgive me if there’s any strange twists or weird comments in the plot line.. and its just a fictional story. But some may be comes from the true to life scene.
This fictional story is about Lui and her family. I thought of a very big twist of blending other characters whom i knew and very much a fan of. The character of Lui is someone a dark part of myself, but here in my story, its someone mysterious kind of a person and loner, who was having a lot of abilities, talents and a very much beauty inside and outside, which are going to explore, though, against her will.
The title refers to how the groups are from different companies with different lives to somewhat fulfilling their dreams as a whole for just being part with Lui’s life, and no one else. It is telling how much Lui is important could be in their lives. Friends, Teachers, Enemies, other people come, and others go away, for the sake of Lui’s safety.

(Lucifer Essa Kenshin = Lui)
CHAPTER 1 : Getting To Know Her
It was a great dawn and I was riding with my skateboard so deftly to the empty road aisling by the pine trees, so peaceful, feeling a fresh, cool breeze brushing against my cheeks, knowing I mustered a speed as i hit the road. I had reached our fences, through the garage then stomped my skateboard as my style of brakes. I live in Gudanov Place. Although, it was quite unusual to me because I’m just new here. My dad used to move a place, as if wanted to collect his marks of his world map against his wall in his room where he could see which place still we didn’t been in… As I placed my skateboard against the wall of our house, somebody knocked at our fence that called my attention. It was a smiley faced woman who’s very new to me, “Good Morning, Miss. Its special offer for the newest beauty products called Mary kay. Would you like to try some Ms Beautiful?” You know, I somehow wanted to drag that lady out of this street and out of sight who is very irritating one to me. I also wanted to mock her like am I needing some treatment here? Am I that super ugly to offer me such weird products? I don’t use those. In fact, I don’t use any of a sort except soap and water. But then, ”I’m sorry, lady, we don’t buy those. Hope you understand.” The lady made a bit frown of her face then, “Oh, its ok. Would you mind if I ask your name? ‘Coz I was bit of amused and interested with your very much of a beauty… and somehow asked what kind or name u always use? You look like a celebrity to me..” then she smiled heartly at me as though, seeing indeed a celebrity… “Nothing. I just use baby soap and water. That’s all.” Then about to open the door to get in when, ”Uhm, what is your name please?” With a little bit hesitation, “Call me Lui. Lui Kenshin.” Then I smiled fakely and about to get in, but the woman won’t stop interrogating as I only heard her asking about my age, but I already shut her with the door behind me. The woman outside cannot believe in herself as if had just spoken to a very popular celebrity or yet, politician… somehow.. I finished settling all foods on the table for breakfast manageably when something so noisy had surprised me, hearing the door burst open at the front yard. Curiosity occurs, I ran towards the living room to check whether it was an intruder or a robbery or something, until I found out it was just my drunken father, Jerry Kenshin. Pale, thin, wears untidy mechanical suit with a snobby look on his face, getting in the room, criss-crossing as he walks, swaying his ½ filled bottle of gin in his right grip as he wiped his mouth carelessly, spilling the gin on the floor. He went to his bedroom slowly, managed to focus on his walks. Unsuccessful, until he reached on his door of his room, banging the door open for such a very lousy move and slumped himself against his bed, spilling the gin all over the floor, then I heard him snorting already.
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